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MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2008-02-28 ch 15,	abuseupdate soon
Itallia 2007-09-25 ch 3,	abuseHm...I think it's funny how, even though they don't remember their past lives, they still refer to each other as "the tomb raider" or "the Pharaoh."
Itallia 2007-09-25 ch 2,	abuseIt all happened kinda quickly, and Yugi sure was fast to get over the computer-talking thing, but otherwise it's an interesting idea. I'm guessing that Kaiba is the funder for this project.
Kidiu Anaji 2007-09-22 ch 15,	abuseAw! This was such an awesome story! I loved the theme, and I'm happy you actually finished it, too. I loved the ending, pretty funny!
DementedxAngelxx 2007-09-21 ch 15,	abuseThis was an amazing story, and I wanted to say good luck writing any other stories your planin on writing.
Carmen-Nemrac 2007-07-22 ch 15,	abusehey! hello! how are you? awesome fic here, i loved every bit of it, i really like how you made malik's personality, it was reall original and definately unique XD and you know what my favourtie part was? the bakura and ryou bits, they are adorable. oh what? nah all of the pairings are adorable! well i hope to read more of your fics! bye bye!!
Clarity2199 2007-01-30 ch 15,	abuseWow...I can tell this was definitely one of your earlire works. The story was quite enjoyable, though I have to say that the end felt more like you were stumbling along to finish it. The explaination on why they used the ancient mummies didn't seem believable, you took almost a chapter in a helf with making the characters ramble instead of getting to the point of the lacuna project, and the ending seemed so fluffy you could choke a horse with it. But...the whole building up was wonderful, the idea of the story was very good, the personalities you did quite well with, and Kaiba's passion and determination to get his brother back was equally wonderful. I'm infact doing a story myself on the loss of Mokuba and the extents that Kaiba will go through in order to bring him back (though definitely not in the same you did). It's called Hopeless Collisions...you're welcome to check it out and read it, if you still like reading Yugioh. I did have one question wandering through my head, though. Mokuba and the others are kept together my machinery, right? Well, if Mokuba doesn't know he's been reincarnated, then eventually he will when he doesn't age. Either that, or his body will outgrow his smaller implants (kind of an oops, there). I thought you were solving that with Malik's new break through...assuming he found a way to totally revive one without machines, in order to fix Mokuba. But...once reading it totally through, it seems it was more of a point to make Ishtar jealous. ;) Anyway...good work, especially for a first here. You probably did a hell of a lot better than some of my earlier work. ;p I'll be looking forward to reading your next TB chapter when it comes up, btw...seeya! Clarity
Time-Again 2006-12-19 ch 15,	abuseT.A: I liked this story. The only thing I didn't like was that you didn't end off with the Joey/Seto relationship thing. XD You just left it hanging. Makes me cry. But it was really cool :D Very original. :) Great work! ^^
Adhiana 2006-11-15 ch 15,	abuseI loved your story. It was hilarious. Especially how Bakura, Ishtar, and Malik always meddle in Kaiba's life. And I was glad that Kaiba got his brother back. That was kind of sad! Thanks for a great story!
Angel Kurisutin 2006-10-24 ch 15,	abuseThat story was so awesome! It had a great plot! I especially loved Malik! He was so funny, greedy, and insane! And even though everybody seems to love to torture Kaiba, I still love him. So the whole time it was all for Mokuba? Of course. I wondered why his brother never made an appearance earlier on. My favorite couple is Seto x Jou, it's too bad they didn't make an appearance in the epilogue (as a couple), but oh well! They weren't the main couple anyway, and Kaiba's phone conversation with Malik was hilarious (so that made up for it)!
Shminzi 2006-08-06 ch 15,	abuseHi, just thought I'd let you know that I put your story in my favs cuz I loved it so much!
Laie 2006-07-13 ch 15, anon.	abuseYaY! I loved it hugs author I learned Latin at school, mainly 'cause I took the Letters branch...since American and British education sistem is different from the Spanish one, I don't know what studies equals to that for you...well, it's what we study when we are 16 to 18 years old, just before entering University...ú__ù
Hikari Kaiya 2006-05-01 ch 15,	abuseAre you going to make a sequel? I would like to know. Cuz' I think it would be really cool so see a story that takes place after this. Also this was a really good story. I like the whole idea of the Yami's being robot clone thingys. (Had more intelligent word but I failed to grasp it) Happy future stories Hikari Kaiya
Yamiace1321 2006-04-10 ch 15,	abuseThat was wonderful! I love this story! It is one of the best I have ever read, and really funny too! I was laughing most of the way through it!
Chi-chan Lurks 2006-04-05 ch 15,	abuseThe end was cute... I almost wish that this was more chobitsy... But that's not where you were going wiht this.

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