What's "pellucid"?

Oh and great story, some nice detail (I love the dune bit)and an interesting way of looking at Seifer's part of the game.

hi! you haven't written in a while, and i'm just glad you've uploaded another one. ^_^ this was short, but i think that you've really captured a nice scene on this one. seifer coming back to garden is something that i've thought a lot about myself, and i gotta hand it you for making this very believable. write more!^_^

p.s. i'm sorry if i can't help you with the spacing; it's something that has also boggled me ever since i came to this wretched site. it looks okay, anyway. good luck with college!=)

this is a good story

this is just my personal opinion, but i tend to dislike present tense novels

but for a present tense novel it ain't bad!! keep at it
=)

well...38 reviews of my fic deserves one from me i guess..hehe.. it's a good beginning and i'm interested to see where you're going to take this. continue when you can:)