 Unseen Watcher 9/29/06 . chapter 3 Yup. I just checked and I /have/ inflicted my imagination on you before. Just in less detail. *sheepish shrug* My way of saying 'Hello' I guess. _ |
 Unseen Watcher 9/29/06 . chapter 2 This is one of those fics that a person always comes back to.
I can't tell you how much fun I have imagining what comes afterwards. It's always the same scenario (altered every now and then at a new angle)... and a bit of character torture. It involves his sister finding out (the spying psycho), his father finding out through her (snitching bitch), and Shinobu being brought in as he steps out for another of his lessons and his father resorting to a will softening drug and a lash. I'm mean, I know. Then Mitsuru (who is tied/close enough to Shinobu to sense something wrong) encounters Subaru on his way to find out where his cousin is (getting a ride from a curious Noroku-sama and his friends) and them all charging in to Tezuka's place to see that Shinobu has lost control of his powers (via the drug and his father's comments about persuading him during his friends) and everything in the room is whirling like his own personal hurricane with his father and his goons cowering in corners (Hmm. I wonder if his mother set up a few barriers to lessen his power and they were blown out when his temper snapped?). Mitsuru makes it through (with only minor damage) and manages to calm him down. Some discussion/disapproving talk between Noroku and Tezuka-san (he's a businessman. He'd /Know/ who Nokoru was), and they take Shinobu back to the Mansion to recover and his friends to get acquainted with the inhabitants while Subaru ponders what to do (to adopt him fully with the name Sumeragi or not? Ask Shinobu when he wakes up. Saa). ...Have I inflicted this on you before? *sheepish shrug* I just wanted someone else to have it in their head too. Who better than you? Not that I don't appreciate it! _ |
 James Birdsong 7/8/06 . chapter 3 I found it very lovely. |
 James Birdsong 7/8/06 . chapter 2 Quite excellent. Yes I'd say that was excellent *smiles* |
 James Birdsong 7/8/06 . chapter 1 That was quite excellent _ |
 Unseen Watcher 2/23/05 . chapter 2Sequel, Onegai? When his father finds out or something? I keep having this wonderful imagination scene where everyone from Mitsuru to Nokoru barge into a Condo where the elder Tezuka is 'persuading' his son to give up his new association. . . bye bye! *evil snicker* |
 Sekaina 7/6/03 . chapter 3*happy eyes* that was such a cool fic! is it all done forever? it was really good... |
 Sekaina 7/6/03 . chapter 2This is a cool fanfic! It's just plain cool...eh.heh |
 Sekaina 7/6/03 . chapter 1This was a cool fic! I don't know anything about Greenwood but I like this fic none the less! *reads on about Subaru-kun* |
 samuraiheart 2/28/03 . chapter 3Yay! It's so nice to see more of this story. You did a wonderful job with characterization. It was all very believable. Of course, it demands a sequel _ if you want to write one, that would be lovely. I especially liked the line "Tokyo makes it's own stars." - it was so reminescent of Tokyo Babylon Subaru it was almost sad. Great job once again! _ |
 Unseen Watcher 2/25/03 . chapter 3Ah, good. I'm glad this is continuing. Love the interactions and the *snicker * Gauntlet of Doom. |
 kaoru 2/25/03 . chapter 3 it's complet? O.O
no! want more!
please make a sequel! I like very much this crossovers, want see shinobu when he learn to be a onmyouji with subaru, want see him and subaru together for talking at shnobu's father. |
 icediamond 2/23/03 . chapter 3Yay! Shinobu managed to get some sort of happiness not involving beds and Mitsuru, and he's still as cool as ever! *grins* I loved the ending scene between him and Mitsuru. |
 samuraiheart 2/16/03 . chapter 2This is amazing! I love it so far and I really hope you continue it. It's a very neat idea for a story. You've done a great job of portraying all of the characters and creating a plausible link between them. I especially love the line "It was a look of remembered discontent, from a time before he'd given up on even that." - it's such a vivid description and conveys so much! I also really loved this part too: "Priorities were interesting. Kamui rarely had the patience for school or homework. But when Subaru worked late, or just walked the streets of Tokyo late at night, Kamui was the only one with the patience to wait for him to come back." It's probably just wishful thinking on my part though. Well, good luck with the rest and I look forward to reading more! _ |
 Unseen Watcher 2/6/03 . chapter 2 oooo. I like this VERY much. Well written and a great crossover. Those two meeting was a great idea. |