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| Kinky-Nami-Lass 2008-08-20 ch 12,  | abusewhoa, this is one seriously good story! I loved it! I wasn't too keen on the ending with her dream... but I'm a sappy 'happily-ever-after' gal... |
| hecate0808 2008-07-11 ch 3, | abuseawsome! |
| darkangeldemon2009 2008-05-16 ch 12, | abusei liked it bet it was wreid at the end was that gust a dream that kagome was haveing or what so pleace get back to me if u have some time and r u going to update or not i hope that u do k and i hope to haer from u soon bye now ^_^Angel^_^ |
| Shira 2008-04-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseWOW. This whole chapter was effin amazing! I fell totally and completely in love with the last dream sequence with Naraku. Wow again. You area a sorceress on a keyboard. Once again, the last few paragraphs were phenomenal. Lol, you've got me ranting now :) |
| 321noeoen123 2008-03-08 ch 12, | abuseHey there! Oi... I sure as hell didn't see that coming! And by the way, why do you claim/say the rating is PG-13, while the site says it's rated: T? Or is that the same? Tia! ~X |
| bb 2008-01-13 ch 12, anon. | abuseWell, this is my second time re-reading this story (the last time was two years ago and I totally forgot what it was about) so in re-discovering your protrayals of Sesshoumaru and Kagome have been a very interesting and enjoyable journey. I've skimmed through your reviews page and I am dismayed in finding so many complaints about the ending. :( I guess they've missed seeing the story genre, which was if I can remember correctly, a 'Romance/Horror.' It saddens me to see that people would only think of a story being 'good' if it had a happy ending. |
| aismaiden17 2008-01-10 ch 12, anon. | abuseawtz...sori but i don't like the ending.. |
| cherryblossom94 2007-12-24 ch 12, | abuse*cough* so I really like the story, but I'm kinda confused...what happened? After Kagome made the wish I mean...is it like her and Sessy get engaged, then when she's asleep and dreams, she's with Naraku? ? lol! could you please explain? anyway, great job..I wasn't particularly fond of this chapter though... |
| AristocraticAssassinLover 2007-11-28 ch 12, | abuseI loved your story all the way to the end. My eyes were practically GLUED to the screen. I don't really care much for the ending, but that doesn't mean it's not great. All in all this was a marvelous story. Different and endearing. I'm going to your profile to check out your other stories now. Keep up the good work!! AristocraticAssassinLover |
| Takani-tff 2007-07-31 ch 12, | abuseThat is like totally Cruel! *whine* |
| Inuhanyou21 2007-07-20 ch 12, | abusePretty good, although I didn't care for the ending. Good none the less! |
| XxCrescentMoonxX 2007-05-29 ch 12, | abuseRevamping?? More like just rewrite the whole damn thing. If you didnt like the story, u didnt have ti make the characters life worse. you could have stopped. or at least written a sequel WITH a happy ending. YOu said it was going to be a haooy ending. More like happily never after. |
| nanamihikari 2007-04-15 ch 12, | abuseAre you going to just leave it like that? It really needs a sequel or something like that to tie off all of the loose ends. A lemon between the two would have been nice too. |
| clusterlizard1 2007-04-15 ch 12, anon. | abusethat bad dream thing was really a twist i wasn't expecting! damn that'd be freaky-ish, having naraku in ur dreams, though i think i'd prolly end up selecting him for a ** eye contestant. he he... evil of me i know, no teven he should have to go through that... ~clusterlizard1 |
| ThE NiGht's DaRk StaR 2007-03-19 ch 12, | abuseNO! why did u end it like this?!?!?!?!?! i love this story and you just made me hate the ending!! |