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sissyHIYAH
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
WHO! God, I love this! Never seems to be enough Xu...

And I can imagine your version of Xu taking a baseball bat to her fax or copier in an Officespace-esque fit of rage...right after she has used it to crack a few noggins...
Verdanii
2005-09-17 . chapter 1
That was great, Chickie.
Trepie
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
Ooh. This captured her bitterness perfectly. Xu's portrayal is so realistic. I've kinda (definitely) felt this way before too, but I know that I'm too afraid to go through with anything. As always continue with the wonderful job. :D
Kitian
2004-08-10 . chapter 1
I agree with Lunatique; everything said in this fic rings quite true.

The thing is, the whole time that I was reading it, I could imagine Nida saying the exact same words. Seems like there's quite a few neglected characters in FF8; too bad there aren't more stories like this out there to shine the spotlight on them.
Cyrell
2002-11-22 . chapter 1
Dark, but the thing is that everyone's probably felt like that at least once in their lives. The reader can almost empathise with Xu, eventhough as you said, it's not a part of her you normally see. I thought it was riveting because of its realism.
Lunatique
2002-11-16 . chapter 1
Incidentally, I have much the same thoughts of Xu as you depict here. She seems way too overqualified to be a perennial assistant. "Every time I staple something together, or run down to the copy room, I die a little more inside." Man, that rings so very true. Excellent story, a moving tribute not only to an underappreciated character but also to a lot of talented young women out there who feel their lives have become a dead end.
Auria, Quis, Malice
2002-11-15 . chapter 1
Wow, Starlight...

That's good!:)

-Quis, (the other two aren't here, lol)
celandra
2002-11-15 . chapter 1
i said it before, i'll say it again, wonderful piece
The Lady M
2002-11-13 . chapter 1
Wow. . .really depressing but very good all the same! It's a good interpretation of Xu's 'dark side'. Good job! ~*Megs*~
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