That was beautiful. But it needs a chapter two because you forgot to cure the virus.

I love the way you captured the pain and the longing. Made me ache.

*sob*

It's been a while since I've read this, and I just re-read it before posting this review. I didn't know who you were when I first rummaged through FFN...

I haven't seen Season 2 yet, but I know what happens and this would've been a beautiful episode... Sigh.

How do you do it, Kyre? So many emotions to contend with and passing of time without making the story feel rushed at all.

True characters, once again. You have your finger on the pulse, hun.

*sob* So beautiful...

Cheers!
Mouse :)

Intresting. Kendra really wasn't present in season two, though. Original Cindy could have been used there instead. otherwise very good. I hated the Alec misperception in Hello, Goodbye. MA is completely imcompetent insane and unrealistic.

Why couldn't the writers on the show be as smart as its fans? Another beautiful story and the way that episode should have been. I like the use of the song for the basis of this fic. It really does work if you consider things and change it just a bit. Good work.

Takin' a little time to catch up on a few reviews. ;)

I really liked the varied emotions this fic brought out - and all of them within character of Max and Logan. It is so like them to run a gauntlet of trials before facing even each other. There's pain, frustration, concern, despair, but above all of that there is hope and, of course, love.

Wonderful work!

amazing and very sad

Sorry it's taken me so long to get here ... but it's been nice to know it was waiting. This is just such a true, realistic portrait of how people behave when they've broken up and they shouldn't have ... the way they'll do anything to convince themselves that they're doing the right thing and they can will away their feelings. Each walking around the city, then running into each other, reminded me of their nighttime walk in the Pilot. And I like the way other people don't try to talk them into or out of anything ... they end up doing that themselves. Nice story!

Loved the slow pace and reflective atmosphere of this piece. Very nice writing--as always.

I know I told you what I thought of this when I did the quickest beta of all time on it :). I could tell straight off that this was one of those stories that just had to get out. It is totally compelling. I'm writing this with a tear in my eye (again). Beautiful imagery. Wonderfully done. Extremely moving. *sniff sniff*.

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me you are going to be writing another chapter!!! There are so few M/L stories on the board anymore, and most of them aren't very good. Yours IS great!!!! I really want to see what happens next!!!

This is a beautiful story and so well written. Thank you for that.

I can't even point out what I loved best about it because I loved it all.

Sorry I couldn't find anything to critique but it was perfect.

Oh, i think I didn't review back at CH so I'm doing this here.
Kyre, this is soooo wonderful. With the repeated image of the pictures and all these things that always seem to happen when you don't think about it. Like meeting in the street, ringing phones when you just took it to call the same person yourself. And a happy end for M+L. What do we need more?

Its really good

Tremendous atmosphere. So full of longing and hurt and guilt. Very well done! And just when I needed a happy ending. Thanks.

:)

I like! I most definately like! I was in the perfect mood for something M/L when I read this, and it really hit the spot. Thanks!!!