You know, that is probably one of the best fic I've read, filled with Luke and Lorelai love and mh, it lasts forever. I swear, some parts had me laughing real hard. I love, love your Lorelai and Rory. Especially the girls night out, where they end up auditioning for a play. n_n

Now. There's just one or two things that annoy me, and it might just be me.

Way. Too. Much. Eyerolling.

I mean, fine. Eyerolls communicate the traditional "Oh, you annoy me so" message with style and humor, and it feels as good to use as a verbal comeback in real life. However... Damn. You should just try to count them out, see how much time the action can be used, watch them multiply and have children. (Smirk, smile, shrug, roll eyes, reply, say, narrow eyes-- pattern)

And, how come the Cosmo article seemed to be addressed to men?

Anyways. It's a great fic, and I feel bad that I'm complaining about it because the level of irritation is nowhere near the level of love, y'know? It just needs me pointing it out, because when I read the story, I feel like Luke does nothing but roll his eyes (and makes food and does Lorelai). Which he doesn't do all that often, I think. I mean, really.

But YEAH. I do love the fic. *nods* It deserves every praise in the world.

dudly xx

Such a long, wonderful story. You're a fantastic writer.

I've been reading this story for hours, and I'm just amazed by how well you've captured the personalities and nuances of all of these characters. You've absolutely hit Emily's manipulative, disapproving personality head on. Absolutely fantastic.

Are you suggesting that Jess saw Lorelai's goods?
LOL

Haha, this is not exactly the best thing the begin a review with, I suppose, but I'm a horrific fanfiction reader, I read and then I usually don't comment unless something truly impresses me. This story has been so wonderful to read, it took a while, but I finishe d it all in one go. Its been a joy to read a story where the characters are captured so well and everything is error-free. The whole idea itself too was awesome. I noticed that you haven't been active for a long while and I think that it's a true pity. Please please, write something new. I love love love your work. I'm reading the sequel now.

I think I probably read this when you first wrote it and remembered it was one of my favorites. I haven't read it in forever and now decided to reread it. I've read a few recent ones lately, and I like this one because it doesn't have all the stress of what they've now gone through on the show.

I just read your story, and it was amazing! I loved it. Wonderful story, really.

I'm afraid you'll have to add me to the long list of people that love your writing and can't get enough of it. But don't know where to find it. If you could please tell me where to find the original versions of you story, that'd just like make my year.

I LOVE this story, I have read it like 4 or 5 times. I really like it. One thing I really like about this chapter is the fact that you catch the romanitc, and beautiful thing about consumationg a marriage, not just having sex. I love it when authors can catch that beauty. Thanks, I LOVE THIS STORY!

Well, it took me about 12 hours but I finished it! This fic is long on a scale I can't even comprehend. And it was awesome the whole way through. I loved it! I don't really have much else to say... Or anything. But it's now midnight, so blame the time. Really great story. Wonderful. Top notch. Brilliant. You rock. Yay. Bye now.

this was good. looks like you're not on the site anymore but if you did any more the story would drag

I love this story. It was so great. Please write a sequel!

This has to be one of the best if not the best fan fiction I have ever read. I couldn't stop reading. Your character were totally lovable and their problems realistic. Although the story was incredibly long, I can't help wishing there was more. I'll definitely be rereading this story in the future. Thank you for sharing it!

u better upgrate it or i will KILL u'r FAMILY so your beter get started u got a HOUR or u will die?

you better upgrade a new one of i'll hunt u down. PS. it was good