Wow neat! I stumbled upon this quite by accident, and I was really happy I had! You sure can write! I love the way you portrayed Ayaz especially.

Well...That was...err...kinda cool. Love the detail and ideas, but the switching from one chaaracter's view to the other's kinda tripped me up. Love how Rose is portrayed, she really is a kick-** character, isn't she? Well, lookin' forward to new installments.

Whoo updates! *scrambles of to read the other fic too*

Don't u love summer? *sits back and rubs sunscreen on her white (so white it glows) skin* Now this is the life...O_- His father just killed? Ohh how lovely for him...HEY A YELLOW DRAGOON STONE! Cool! Maybe it represents lightning or sumthing. Is it me or do I miss the main parts like the evil red-head monster thing? O well I am a uh well err...Lets just say I'm unique. Hehe Ok anyways I wanna go to bed now so night night.

LOL that was a good one. Wow so far I'm getting all these introductions. I hope u continue updating this story cause it is good. I have one question in this, (if it said this on summary stupid me) is this a Rose/LLoyd?

Even better, but shorter. update soon! :)

Real good!

^_^ I was a wee bit confused as to who was talking when at points, but for the most part i enjoy your style of writing and do hope you write more!! oo- mysteries!!

Hey Muslima, I was wondering when you would have this out! Great job- another great fic. I loved Legend of Dragoon. And don't pay attention to Clearbrook your story is very clear that is if you know what LoD is. Well I hope you get your Ifrit-fic out soon... I will be waiting.

I honestly dont know what you were talking about (2nd pd) this is a very good fic!

Great job