This fic has a good simple plot with plenty of in-depth character interactions. It's well written too. But damn, I hope I find a guy like Larry, i don't care that he's fictional >:P

This is the first Ally fanfiction I've ever read and even though I'm a big Billy/Ally fan, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. You caught Ally's extreme moods perfectly. I loved the three snowmen and when she heard him singing. Putting in all of Jaimie's antics was good too. And I'm glad that Ally's parents got back together. Great story!

Wonderful, wonderful! Although it was a bit like a soap opera with one too many twists in the plot, I liked the spririt of the story. The characters were... slightly out of character but the storyline pulled together so beautifully that I didn't mind. All the luck in the future!

This was great!Larry gets Ally and Victor goes bashing!!Yes!It was sad, when Ally was inthe coma, and at parts she was atad neurotic, great!And how am I going to live now they're not making any more episodes?Its not fair!That show was my life!!
Larry just rules.Robert Downey Junior is so gorge.
-Mel

I like your story, its engaging and yu seem to really know your characters very well, which is good. It looks like i was reading a script (It's that good). The story's flow is smooth, as well as the dialogues, keep it up. I'll look forward to your next work.

sorry i wasn't looking what i was doing that last review was ment for chappy 14 and not 1 (if you hadn't already guessed) OOPS!
any way, good story, hope you write more.
bye.
saz ;)

it's ashame it's the end it will be a bit strange when i look on the ally fics not to see this fic being updated any more when i finally manage to pull myself away from the moulin rouge section. oh well the only consolation you could possibly
give is more ally fics or a sequal to this one set a few years in the future.
saz

It took me two days to read through all this but I liked it. I always liked larry and I was dissapointed with the way the show went after he left. I stopped watching it actually. I am a big fan of happy endings, and what better happy ending than an I love you one. Very nice. I also liked the chapter lengths.short enough to read through quickly, but detailed enough to give me the info I wanted.
and btw.trippy coincidence.her shrink's name.My ex boyfriends Name is Paul Wyatt.I almost flopped over from shock when I read that part LOL.
keep writing!

despite the fact that i have not left any reviews untill now i have been follwing this story and i really like it. i hope that this is not the last chappy although what you have written could be a suitable ending but then that wouldn't be nice would it? because as greedy as i am i want more so plz let there be more chappys in the future
saz

HEY! i really like this story, is this meant to be the last chapter?? it'd be great it you would keep writing! I lovee ally and so this is ultimatly a fav story! Hope you will keep writing!! :oP

HEY! i really like this story, is this meant to be the last chapter?? it'd be great it you would keep writing! I lovee ally and so this is ultimatly a fav story! Hope you will keep writing!! :oP

This was a really good story, do you have any others up your sleeve?

Ah i love this fanfic! Please continue i am totally hooked and everytime i come onto fanfiction.com i look to see if you have updated! This is great and i love reading! Please continue! :oP

Hey, this story is great! Please keep going i love reading it and as Ally and Larry are the best together i can't wait to see how this story turns out!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!! Kudos to you!!

You're story is fantastic! the plot, the character's lines...it's the kind of thing that you'd see on the actual programme. My review's are always picky, so I guess i should say that maybe there needs to be a bit more humour, as the tv programme usually has. i dunno, maybe i'm missing all the funny parts. :S luv the story