AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

A CLIFF HANGER!

PLEASE FINISH BEFORE I FALL!

great work so far, but just one part you may have left out.

when sunni is climbing the mountain, it says she gets half way,

her boots slightly thined from the rocks and she desides to take off

her boots.

does she put the boots back on to get to ursalia, i think she would after

climbing all that way, plus, did she carrry them that high up?

other then that, great work

hey cool fic! Ignore all that cr@p about gummi bears not being good fanfic material. You do an awesome job!

_ The story is getting a lot better. Hope to see more!

wow,

it looks like both sunni and buddi are having the same vision.

can this be a omen?

it is looking very scarry, iiiis it going to be a horror ?

test

Hm.. Interesting:) Just a few spelling errors. I am interested!

-cheets

not bad, sort of a horror story theme

i see.

btw, i did see one error in the story,

if i remember right in the gummies in snowy weather

did have winter boots, or protection for there feet.

something i did remember from snows your old man eps from

the series. will the story have more parts ?

wwwwhat will happen to buddi, is he haveing an ESP flash?

Nice...VERY NICE! _ Finally! A serious fic of akiddie show!