omg! i finally found the first fic i ever read! i loved it to death and cried when the computer crashed when i was going to favorite! i found it yesterday and read it all over again and let me say it always gets better! i love you and would hug you to death if i could see you but i love this fic to death!

this is really funny i hope you write more stuff.
^_^ endragh ^_^

hi my sister told me to read this fic... OMG it's so good! you have to continue it... *glares* if you don't i'll send my minion out to get you!
signed her almightyness, the Shadow (aka fluffy-kins)

waiiii!!! kawaiii!!!

good one. but by the way, bishouNEN is for boys. BishouJO is for girls. that's why it's shouNEN ai and shouJO ai. geddit? ^_^

wow a sequel? i'll be waiting for it!!!
and how i love their reaction!!!!!!! hahahaha

You have finish the story!!! Congratulations!!! You've reached 100 reviews in chptr 14. An incredible feat!!!

Arigatou *bows respectfully towards the author* for making a small Haku/Lirin part. I'm glad that you didn't make it so romantic...just two old friends who cares for each other sincerely-->Lirin sad because she's not strong, and Goku/Haku consoling her telling her that she had brother while Goku had none.

**Sometimes, what we really want is true friends who can care for us, and play with us forever, without being so romantically involved, yet at the end of the day, you would want to be with him/her forever, as long as he's/she's there for you.

I can't wait for the next sequel. Sanzo-ikkou and Kougaiji-taichi for once combined forces to fight greater evil. I know you don't like writing romantic parts, but I JUST WANT ONE THING PLEASE,--> When there's a life-threatening danger, ALWAYS HAVE HAKU/NATAKU SAVING LIRIN'S BUTT. Kougaiji would be busy helping Yoane, sometimes forgets his sister. You admit it..Lirin's the weakest of all, and she really need a strongest friend to defend her (the motto of Japanese RK--Must be strong in order to protect the weak).

Sugoi!!!

Oh yea! oh Yea! Sequel! Sequel! That was sooo good! XD XD XD
(Gang pops out)
Sanzo: I'm gonna...
Me: *sweat drop* Maa. Haku is GOku...so...
Gojyo: Hey!
Goku: ^ ^
Hakkai:^^''''''''
Me & Goku: Gabbatte! We'll wait for the sequel!

Damn. I want that harisen Sanzo was trying to win. Maybe I can hit my older siblings with it... -_- Hahaha reading this fic had been fun ^_^ But alas, it ends here. I would just like to thank you for this wonderful fic and I hope that you'll create more soon! When you do, inform me, ok? ^_~ I wanna check it out. Ja!

ooh... cool!!! so heaven knows how to party too??? jeesh! could just imagine the whole heaven rolling on the ground. i think even the ground was laughing... ha ha ha... strange that the mortals below couldn't hear it. could have sworn that they heard it loud and clear... like lightning in the night sky... haa haa haa... i can't wait for the sequel. i'm pretty sure they're gonna be fighting that li touten imposter!!!

You ended...and the last chapter was funny! =D Merry Christmas 2 U~!

CONTINUE!!!

I review again to help you try doing the bold, italics and underline words.

Use Netscape Composer. Copy your MSWord paragraph into Netscape Composer. Then you can ittalize, bold, underline using the buttons there. Save it, and then upload the file into FF.net.

they will be surprised of course since they dropped their suspicions about Haku being Goku and stuff... anou... about the part you said Haku was half running, half something and half something... Take a sheet of paper. cut it in half. there are two, right? so it can't be half, half and half. anyways, great job! (i mean it) *still sulky from being banned*