OMG! *laughs* This story is totally radical! I can't stop laughing! When are you going to write the next chapter? I simply can't wait any longer! -FA

This was good. But I want to ask you something. We both have similar intrests and I too want to become an author. This is important so for more details email me at rvmuniz@

Dude, I love reading your new chapters ^^ FASTER MORE FASTER!!

Awesome! I've always loved your stories! Keep it up! My neopets username is smartyoung, and make me a neofriend! I have over 50,0 NP right now. Oh, and how do you upload chapters? Email me!

OOh, pretty good! Can't wait to see what happens next

Hehehe, very funny, as usual!

Lol, an F in math and walking into a closet; sounds like Carolyn is on the ball today. I really liked this chapter, and the whole jewel thing reminded me of the Shikon Jewel in Inu-Yasha, cept that was shattered into a lot more than three pieces. Anyway, I hope you get the next chapter out soon!

OOh, suspense! . . . 0_0 By the way, my username is katani_petitedra on Neopets. So just in case ya wanna Neomail me or somethin, go ahead. ^_^

hm... yes... very interesting! wha really caught my eye when i looked at the summary was the name Carolyn cuz thats my name! :3 keep writing!

Hehe, very funny, as usual. Is it okay with you if I use the bit about someone distracting guards by doing a monkey dance? ^_^ Update soon!

I love the story and plot, especially how you well you managed to add a background song to Chapter 11. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^

vewy vewy cool!!

that story is the best keep it up and if you aren't to busy can you read mine it's called the lone heroes. You put alot of thought into that and you should be pleased

HI!! LOVE THE STORY!! then again im caitlin in it so... but i would still love it if i wasent!!

YAY! You updated! ^_^ Yep, it's me, you're faithful fan! ^_^ Keep writing!