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| sally 2005-02-10 ch 3, | abusewow. what a twist to the story. I like it. Please continue! thanks |
| Notatracer 2003-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. You have quite the knack for the sad story. *sniff* |
| AudaciousDJ 2003-01-11 ch 3, | abusegreat story... it made me want to cry. keep it up! ~ audacious |
| KrystalBlaze - Jerikor 2002-12-27 ch 3, | abuseThis is so sad! I like it! (Be afraid, Erin, be very afraid . . .) It's hard to read when you write like this, but I loved the chapter and the plot and the new development. It's a good twist. It really adds to the story. Love it! Kim |
| KrystalBlaze - Jerikor 2002-12-07 ch 2, | abuseThis is so sad, Erin. Too sad for me! I'm gonna go cry! You meanie! Is this it? Don't you leave me here, you! I either want closure or another guessing game and I send you a virus over the mail. Got it? Good! Well, I think it's an okay story. Thanks for the thanks! Well, gotta go! Mail me soon! |
| Suz4eva 2002-11-15 ch 1, | abuseYour stories are so sad. :( They are good though. Good luck in future writing. -Suzums |
| KrystalBlaze - Jerikor 2002-11-15 ch 1, | abuseThat's plain sad, Erin! That's so sad I was going to cry! Cry and cry and cry! Poor Stackhouse . . . I especially loved the part when he died and he sort of like visited them. I'm sort of a sucker for paranormal things myself . . . I'm weird, but of course you know that! But why'd his wife call him Stackhouse? Wouldn't his wife call him by his first name? Also, don't write in blocks like that! I was confused! Other than that, the idea is great. You should really do something else like this. Good job and mail me soon! |