wow. what a twist to the story. I like it. Please continue! thanks

I really liked this. You have quite the knack for the sad story. *sniff*

great story... it made me want to cry. keep it up! audacious

This is so sad! I like it! (Be afraid, Erin, be very afraid . . .)

It's hard to read when you write like this, but I loved the chapter and the plot and the new development. It's a good twist. It really adds to the story. Love it!

Kim

This is so sad, Erin. Too sad for me! I'm gonna go cry! You meanie!

Is this it? Don't you leave me here, you! I either want closure or another guessing game and I send you a virus over the mail. Got it? Good!

Well, I think it's an okay story. Thanks for the thanks! Well, gotta go! Mail me soon!

Your stories are so sad. :( They are good though. Good luck in future writing.

-Suzums

That's plain sad, Erin! That's so sad I was going to cry! Cry and cry and cry! Poor Stackhouse . . . I especially loved the part when he died and he sort of like visited them. I'm sort of a sucker for paranormal things myself . . . I'm weird, but of course you know that! But why'd his wife call him Stackhouse? Wouldn't his wife call him by his first name?

Also, don't write in blocks like that! I was confused!

Other than that, the idea is great. You should really do something else like this. Good job and mail me soon!