Well done Shada, I believe you managed to capture the inner thought's of these character's exceptionally well, especially Palpatine's dark inner most thought's well done I want to read more from you in the future!

Very well written, Shada! I love how you captured Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Palpatine's emotions, and the fact that you wrote about them at the most critical point of the SW story (right before E3), well, that's just very cool. You must write more! More, I tell you! More!

I really like this... just a little glimpse into the thoughts and worries of each of them... I especially like the first section; there are some good lines there about the nature of the relationship between Obi-Wan and Anakin.

You know I love to see your writing, and I'm glad you got up the courage to post this! Here's hoping you post more in the future :)

I love how you capture the souls of all three characters...Obi-Wan's nobility yet worry for Anakin, Anakin's frustration in trying to find his way, and Palpatine's cold cruelness as he moves the galaxy around like pieces on a chessboard to suit his purposes. Nicely done. :) *more more!*