A great story. I liked the part where Gil and Sara were testing each other's spook factor.

This is fun--a nice lighthearted moment that doesn't devolve into intensity.

good job

This is the best Halloween story I have ever read, It's just genius.

Thanks for sharing!

xoxoPAUxoxo

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wonderful. i liked how grissom and sara were so relaxed around each other. you should consider writing a sequel.

Very nice story, well done! I'm not sure it's completely in character since it's unusual to see them so playful, but it's very enjoyable! You should be proud of yourself!

Jane M.

Awww!! That was really cute!! I liked it!! Keep up the good work!! =)

I just love your stories. You really know how to write about the geeks. You make them so adorable.

This story totally rocks! Loved it. Glad I was reading it during daylight hours however.

That. Freaked. Me. Out! I was sitting in total darkness when I started reading...practically sent the chair to the floor in my mad scramble for the light switch. But it. Was. So. Freakin. Cute! I loved it. Aaaaaaahhh, the Geek Love. I could totally see this on the show. You rock!

This was SO amazing and funny. I loved it.

This is very cute. I've read a lot of Halloween stories but this is my favorite. And (on an "I'm-an-idiot" note) I saw the title and thought the B was H and I was like what the heck? But I'm okay now. :-) Honestly.

The brilliance of MC. The amazing little things you do with words and dialogue that make our Geeks so humbly lovable. Not only did this piece capture my heart, but first prize in the contest. Well-deserved! Keep writing!!!

Very creative...I like it!