Luv, this story was great. The characterization was dramatic without being overmuch and remained true to the actual show, so hey! Of the good, here! Possibly the only problem I have is with Buffy being the 'Child of the Earth' deal. I mean, she's cool. But not that cool. It might actually have made more sense with Willow in that position. But either way, it wasn't a big deal and the story works perfectly well with Buffy or the bloody Ghost of Christmas Past, so who the hell cares?

I had a lot of fun with this story. I thought it was really big, it had a lot going on. Great opening sequence. The idea of Wes telling a nun: "Sorry madam, but move your **," was very funny.
I liked the structure and all the action. Great job with Gunn's character. Good work all around.

wow. Really good babe. great structure, and use of humour, compelling.

and, yay, slash- got to be good :)

Bloody brilliant!!

Loved the tension between the two of them, it's just like what used to be on AtS :)

The scene where Wes was shot brought a tear to my eye, the way you described Gunn's feelings at that point was heartbreaking.

And then of course, somehow, we still managed to have not only a happy ending...but a *funny* one. Poor Angel, out of the frying pan and into the fire!

Yeah, the guys ought to forget about Fred and go for each other. It'd probably work out better.