Reviews for What Are Little Boys Made Of?

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quiller 2007-07-07 ch 5,	abuseI remember this story from when I first found So glad you returned to it, it is so poignant. Hope you will be continuing. quiller
SUPERNATURALfreakisJOBROFAN... 2007-07-05 ch 5,	abuseJeff shouldn't have said those things to john in an earlier chapter, jeff should have told john. oh, well, well done with chapter 5
bluesweetie1978 2007-06-29 ch 4,	abusehey great story keep up the great work please update soon
SUPERNATURALfreakisJOBROFAN... 2007-06-29 ch 4,	abuseSad Very Sad but Jeff shouldn't have yelled at John like that
Ayanna Wildfire 2007-06-29 ch 4,	abuseThe Story so far looks good. And I can't wait to see where you go from here. There is however a few things I'd like to point out. At Five years old, Alan would be able to tell the differance between a banana and cheese, be able to talk in full sentances and probably only need a booster seat for eating at the table. You currently have Alan acting more like a toddler(1-3 years) than a school aged child. At Five Alan would have started kindergarden, so your portrayal of him is just a little off. It may seem like a minor thing, but it's a little distracting to be told an age and then have the character act MUCH younger than that age for no reason other than "because that's what the author wants". It pulled me out of your story a bit. I'm sorry. Jeff, in the last chapter, however, I think was handled almost perfectly. I can see him snapping and being rather distraught from loosing Lucille. So well done.
Megz McGizzle 2007-06-29 ch 4,	abuseHmm haven't seen this story before! Must've been a while since you updated! But I'm so glad you did, this is a really great story! Please update again soon!! :D
Potterwatch 2007-04-15 ch 3,	abuseI'm enjoying it so far, now come back and update it.
Fried Eeyore 2004-12-06 ch 3,	abuseUPDATE! added 2 mi favourites - again! lv me
zeilfanaat 2004-06-09 ch 3,	abuseAre you going to continue this? Please? It's good!!
quiller 2003-06-21 ch 3,	abuseLoved the view of them all as younsters - Gordon's goldfish, Alan 'tesing gravity with toast'. But do I get the feeling you are so fond of them all you can't bear to write the next chapter? Please let us have more!
GillyLee 2003-06-16 ch 3,	abuseAnd how do the socks and the animal live thrive?? I think this needs a sequel :-)
Sarah 2003-04-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseThat is a good no great story. Please up date, what happenes with the snow? How many animals do live in Gordon's room?
yveybevy 2002-11-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseGreat character descriptions. I'm in love with Gordon-he sounds great, so does JoHn. Bracing myself for the inevitable tradgedy that lies ahead. Can't wait to see how this story develops.
NatThaNut 2002-11-19 ch 3,	abuseThe IR boys are childeren, awww. This is good, hope you'll post more soon.
Angelina K 2002-11-19 ch 3,	abuseI love how you described the boys' rooms. Is it very unfortunate mine oddly resembles Gordon's half of the room? Minus the little rodents, of course. And John with teddy bears...can we all say "Aww"?! Hehe. More soon please! I'm loving it!

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