Smiley Poo!: I'm so glad I'm not the only person on this site that can finish a story in three chapter, I love you!

Blaire RWoF: She's didturbing, Is'nt she? but good story, good idea not letting bart and Mandy get together, non of barts relation ships work out...

Not bad. Not bad at all! You may think your fic sucks, but let me tell you, I've read many horrible Simpsons fic and yours is not one of them. Far from it, actually. The story was cute, although it was done before, but you took the opportunity at the end to make a joke out of that fact, which was great. The characters were all pretty believable; I could see this as an episode, as was your objective. I only wish that you wouldn't knock your story. Be confident, get rid of all those side notes in the story (i.e. the I&S scene) and you'll be able to make really good stories! Please keep writing and strive to improve yourself by accepting constructive criticism! (lol, here I am telling you this as if I were a pro! Seriously though, take my advice and I'm pretty sure you'll be a very good writer!) :)

P.S. Great title!

i would just like to say it is excellent and also in chapter to you wrote sandy instead of mandy

This is a true simpsons fan's work! the only thing i could say needed improvement was the itchy and scratchy cartoon. Let the reader read. I did not like those little side interuptions i just wanted the itchy and sratchy. even if it was gross.

lol. :-) funny. it could be a real simpsons episode!

Hmmm, Milhouse is the annoying kid, Bart is tv guy, and Mandy is Mrs. Claus.

More!

-VA

This is quite good! But *please* make up your mind whether you're writing in script or prose form. It seems like you can't decide.

(Oh, and the word "tragedies" is misspelt in the summary. Just pointing it out, because misspelt summaries tend to repel people.)