Please continue! I'm itching to know what happens next.

Reno, this is a fiction all on its own. I love the way you play with multiple persons within a person. Now, pardon me while I go mourn Rude... stupid Combatant...

Nice work with this one too... You write multiple narratives very well... especially your Rude perspective... and you've written Yuffie in! *dances* (she's one of my favorite characters.)
Regards, and all that jazz,
S.

Hmm Reno in Wutai as a boy, never seen that before. :)

I like the tone that you use "yuffie the ninja brat" hehe. And your style is still great...Rude is a little OOC, but eh. He's under pressure hehe

First of all, let me just say that all of these titles are amazing. It is a very creative idea to say the least...*continues on*

Nice as always. The pace has slowed with the addition of Yuffie. Are you still thinking of making this an original? So much easier to follow. Great lil cliff hanger

Heh heh, you've been talking about this a while and I never got round to reading it. Really kewl concept, you've pulled it off really well. I sound kind of apathetic, but if i try to express how intrigued and impressed I am, it'll sound like i'm faking, so keep writing and i'll keep readin!

-TIO

It was good but u should make the acts chapters

i like the theme so far

Very much easier to follow. I like the light you show on Reno's sanity. You

write the way that Reno may very well feel. Leaving the reader very out of control.

Nice, very very nice. Keep it up.

Wow this is very nice work. I love the way you use titles insted of names. Very nice

I love Rude so I like how its more into his head then the others. If you want to make this

a non fanfic piece I am sure that it would look awsome. Your words are great

nicely chosen. Alot happens in this chapter, if you wanted to add more details or split

scenes then it may be a bit easier to follow. It is still beautifully written and very

solid. Keep this up, you are on a great track.