That's... random. And so completely Hikaru to think about...

Well written.

i loved it

so sweet! I really love your fics...

Oh.
I like it. When you said subtle hints, you really meant subtle.
One hundred words is really short. Too short if you ask me.

Aw, how sweet! Very nice usage of just a few words to create a moving scene. Thanks!

Well, it's pretty and all that.

Here's the thing. This is fanfiction. We don't expect it to be completely original. However, if you're going to keep posting these stories that are so blatantly derivative of other people's *fanfiction*, you really ought to give the other authors credit. It's just good manners. If you don't know what I'm talking about, read Akaiblush-san's 'Hitomi no Naka no Melody.' which was posted about twenty five HnG stories before this one. Even your teaser is derivative of her author's notes.

Most authors don't mind if you add to their stories. Most of them are flattered, but if you do it without asking permission first, and without even giving them any sort of acknowledgement for whatever inspiration they may have given you, it just sort of pisses them off.

Please keep this in mind in the future.

Oh man..Some other real cute story...Me likes Me likes !

*grin* Ah, what 100 words can say!

umm... i dont understand XP

very cool _ a lovely moment (and challenge fics are so cool _)