I order you to write more.

Me want more! Come on, write some more! I so wanna know what happens.

Yay for a long chapter! ^_^

Ugh for a somewhat random Anime crossover :(

Admittedly this does come closer than most to working, but the details seem to be very deep rooted and complex. Plus it's been such a long time since I watched Akira I'm not even sure what's going on @_@.

Don't let my little rant stop you now though. The suspense is real and the characters emotions are drawn out rather well. Is the new Mason just a boomer zombie, a ghost, or something in-between?

She's baaaaack...

Why do the dead never stay that way in Anime? Because it's just too much fun to kill them all over again ^_^

Would you get your ** in gear and write another chapter already?!

an interesting story, it could through perhaps use some length and more details.

I like it, I wanna see more!!! go ahead!!

This is a cool and very sweet fic. I really like it, but I wish you'd make the chapters a bit longer. I really want to know what happens next!

All this 'review or else' its like a gun being held to my head.
at least quadrouple the size of your chapters :D

I really like it. ^^

Pretty good keep going!

Short and too the point. I like it though.

But don't write because someone else wants you too... write because 'you' want to :)

Still, I like the story and would like to see you continue. After armageddon is over, are promises all they have to live for any more?

Hey, I liked so much the way you compose. It's pretty short but is like a prologue and it's okay. I think you catch the character's feelings so well. So go ahead. I'm curious about the way you'll treat the story.