Very brilliant and creative! :) Plus, Shadi, in my view, would definitely win the Award for Most Mysterious and/or Enigmatic Character, if there ever was such a thing.

Keep up your super-neat, very brilliant and creatively phenomenal writing! :)

Excellent story. You portrayed Shadi very well, especially since he doesn't get enough love. Also I'm curious as to who the man is at the end? For the life of me I can't think of the answer!

Anyway, keep up the excellent work.

Humbly and Sincerely,

NightmareTroubador

Good job. But who was the man in the cloak?

This is fantastic! I loved how you portrayed Shaddi, and you should write more about him.

Like it... Its to bad its a oneshort

I enjoyed this. It's an interesting concept.

It's very deep.

I think it's important! Who's the person in the blue cloak? Oh, and your story was once again fantastic.

A story about Shadi... Interesting... No, I don't think the writers do enough with him... I'm at a disadvantage. I've only _seen_ him *once*, and that was at the Battle City Finals where he rescued Tristan, so I'm very curious about him... I'm also curious about Mai (just a thought). Makes sense that he'd show up after that fire. ;) But I can see where the writers might find the scene out of place in the series... Again, keep writing. :)

I LOVED IT...MAN I'M RUNNING OUT OF THINGS TO SAY...THATS BAD, BUT I LOVED THE STORY AND ANOTHER THING I NOTICED IS HOW YOU MANAGE TO PUT OTHER CHARACTERS (excluding: Ryou, Anzu, Kaiba and Joey)TO NOTE ON YAMI'S ACTUIAL ...LIVING.

Poor Shaddi so alone. I really loved how you showed Shaddi's personality. It really showed how deep he is. great fic

Pretty good. Are you going to put Shaddi in May It Be? I hope you do. You haven't updated it yet, how could you?

I loved it! I really hope you continue on with this fic... Shadi may be a minor character

to some, but he plays an important part in the whole scheme of things. Also, you

really made me curious- who is the person at the end of the story? Is he the same

one that was following Yugi & co.? Please continue! _

Hey, awesome story as usual. I'm glad you finally got it out of your head for others' enjoyment . There's a couple of grammatical errors, perhaps 2-3 rough spots, but nothing that interferes with the flow of the story (that's just me being picky). It's wonderfully written, though, and reveals a lot about Shaadi, a character I would like to be more well-aquainted with. Evidently, he has a lot of history (no pun intended). Something to think about. Now I'm jealous though ). I wish I had your collection of manga!

This is actually the 1st Shaadi fic that I've come upon. It is actually quite good. You're right about Shaadi though, he is a puzzle within an enigma within a conundrum. There is just so little we know about him! It is also doubtful that we shall find out more about him. Hmm, quite interesting, though. Keep Writing!