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writingforever 2006-09-07 . chapter 2
cool this was good two accept for the cursing for u know 13 year old girls and boys im 13
writingforever 2006-09-07 . chapter 1
great story i really like it since i just started watching the show last year
Amy 2005-01-31 . chapter 13
please update, love the story
Kaydee 2004-11-01 . chapter 14
Do you have any idea of how mad I am that Colleen and JT are over, and Jt has fallen in love with Britney, but now he's kissing Mac. Holy ** the writters are ** in this show. I love Jt and I hope that Jt and Mac can get together! I like the story, but you have to remember, Jt always had a hard time saying he loved Colleen.
lil-nic-2004 2004-01-04 . chapter 14
Hey Good Story! Keep up the good work!
lilybelle80538 2003-08-05 . chapter 14
That was such a great story. I have just recently started watching Y&R again. You have a great talent. I would love to read more. You wrote this story beautifully. It really painted a picture with emotions and such. Again excellent job.
~*Cayla*~ 2003-07-24 . chapter 14
Hey your fic is really cool its not very often you find a Colleen and JT fic . keep up the good work ^_^ i cant eait to read the next chapter
Lady of the Lake2 2003-07-03 . chapter 14
It's a good read... Flows well. Not too choppy like may I have read here.

I simply love the topic...I am always up for a good hospital or injury fic. I search for them specifically. I love to see the charaters worring over each other or the angsty feeling that they caused it somehow... Great stuff.

However, that being said I think that a little more attention to some details might be in order. I write a little myself now and then and I know how hard it can be to write about thing that you do not know about. It only took me 2 seconds on GOOGLE to determine (as I suspected) that the is NO SUCH THING as an active or inactive coma. My point is that there are some fabulous resourses out there for you to use. And if you write about something medical you should research it a bit. I have a Paramedic friend on Yahoo and he is always helping me out in that area!! (Thanx Doug if you are reading this)

This is a good site about coma's in particular "http://w.comarecovery.org"

So anywhoo not trying to bash ya - writing is a process and we all only learn by the mistakes we make!!
dani 2002-12-19 . chapter 14
I am a totally JT and Colleen fan, and there are so little stories about them. So please right more. I loved the first 14 stories.
Logan13 2002-12-07 . chapter 14
This is the first JT/Collen fic I have read and I love it. A sequel would be great.
ShadowGoddess1 2002-12-06 . chapter 14
How could you end it already?
You gotta do a sequel!
This was great, and I need a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
2002-12-02 . chapter 1
it's raul not rau.....no offence....just thought u should get it right
Trisha 2002-11-27 . chapter 14
OMG!!! I loved this story!! I love the pairing of Colleen and J.T and this was the first fic I have read about them. Good Job on the story :)
2002-11-21 . chapter 9
you can not just leave the story like that...more more more please :)
Fendy 2002-11-21 . chapter 9
I love this story you have to finish it. It is so sweet. more please
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