YunaDax 2000-11-06 . chapter 1Wow! Cute, Funny silly......what us ratfic writers commonly called Fluff! Interesting premise for fluff too... most of the Ratfic fluff comes from several basic ideas..... Rat the Cat....(go read Kity Litter and its 10 or so sequels), Rachel upsetting Frank, Frank upsetting Rachel... ergo payback... and so forth. So very interesting premise there! Worked very well mind you.. although I got a tad lost in one of the yelling scenes...
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