Achingly beautiful.

how touching... wow... I'm the only one to review this in 2005... Coolie! :P

aw its so sad! :sniffs: really beautiful, so keep it up! ^^

ARGH. that was too short. or rather, the ending was too abrupt. the beginning paragraphs have it so that the reader expects more introspection before having the entire ordeal end on aya's...state. the writing is incredible, though. i wish i could say something that would reflect the greatness and grace of your writing. incredible stuff, no kidding. =)

a beautiful short description of Aya's most wanted desires. mmm... will you be continuing?

Awww... Sad! I can't think of anything constructive to say, but I liked it. Quite good, for being so short.

I'm actually crying right now... no kidding! I read your fic while I was listening to the midieval,version of gensomaden Saiyuki's TIGHTROPE... heck, I'm now a teary mess! I loved this fic... it's sad... angsty too... *sniff*

I'll be looking forward to your otehr fics... ^^
hugs,
KIM ^_^