 Meredith Tomoko 11/25/00 . chapter 1_ Great, as I know! Just a thought... If you wanna do a sequel... WHY CAN'T YOU JUST CHANGE POVs? *sobs* If you don't know, you will... |
 Meredith Tomoko 11/25/00 . chapter 1I'm reading it again! So sue me! It is strange how one little thing could grow into 83 chapters and counting... You're a darn good author. |
 d101 11/11/00 . chapter 1That was cool. You must be the best writer for Pokémon on here. Now i'm off to read the sequel! |
 JPG 9/30/00 . chapter 1 Dragoness, you have done the impossible. You actually made Ash look good! That is one of the best fics I've ever read! |
 Dujava 9/14/00 . chapter 1Hard-tack biscuits! Yumyum. *goes to make a sandwich*
So far there haven't been any good bits... The chapters before Billie were the best. Oh well, 60 chapters to go. |
 Dujava 9/10/00 . chapter 1The boss is stoopid. *writes Billie and Ash lemon* |
 Dujava 9/9/00 . chapter 1 I'm not reviewing every chapter, okay? Besides, you have my negative comments in AIM. Yippee! |
 E.B.E 9/8/00 . chapter 1 This was a beautiful story. I hope you continue to write fanfiction like this for as long as you can. |
 Aisu Aisu 9/7/00 . chapter 1This fanfic was soooooooo cool! I loved it! Great job! |
 Aisu Aisu 9/6/00 . chapter 1O_O... Wow. |
 Aisu Aisu 9/6/00 . chapter 1OUCH! To say the least... |
 Aisu Aisu 9/6/00 . chapter 1Ahhhh! Poor little Meowth! ::cries with Ash:: |
 Aisu Aisu 9/6/00 . chapter 1Awwwwwww! :( |
 Aisu Aisu 9/6/00 . chapter 1Heehee... Ash is starting to like TR... |
 anon 9/6/00 . chapter 1 All right! TR Ash! I love this fanfic already. (It's my theory that Ash is destined to become a Team Rocket member.) ::rushes off to read more:: |