You know what I just realized? This story isn’t the dark kind of story that I grew accustomed to coming from OH _;;; Just saying.

Okay.. that was pretty.. um... violent o_0;; Gosh I hate that lizard now. Btw... didn’t you say that this is the first of your trilogy? Does this mean that this is Ash’s first torture from you? Interesting. I should start counting.

I gotta admit that it took me a while to set myself up to the mood but when they started talking about the motto, I found myself getting more anxious. I already know Ash can be a deadly person with a... um... karaoke-that’s like one step down from a ring tone! But now the motto!

“Um…We would really appreciate it if you would lend us your Pokémon…” I said.

I heard cricket sounds. Did anybody else hear all that? _;

“Don’t you want to know my secret!”

Good grief, Ash. Whatever it is, keep it to your self and your doctor! o_0;;

Weeee...that was sooo good. I love your fics! I'm off to read the sequeals! ;) Good job once again!

Enja

Easily one of the best Pokemon stories that I've read, and I seen a LOT!

Woah that was one WEIRD story I mean Ash changed like four times to a different person/pokemon! None the less it was spectacular! I loved it! VERY unique! The different Ashes were all well developed and everything I totally liked it!

I really,really,really loved this story. It was great. I hope everyone out there knows who Ash's real dad is. Hint Hint. I do. Anyways This is going under my favorites. bye! -

Whee! I liked this fic. Ash POV with a dark and serious theme, and a sometimes confusing, but really good story! Cool! XD I read it in only about 2 sittings, lol. Meeeeww! *off to read the sequel(s)*

This is one of my favorite storys!

I FINISHED IT YAY

This is starting to get really disturbing

That was good...very wierd, but good...:)

Whoah-oh! I finished it! Yay! Wow, this was really good. I'm glad things are um, okay, for Ash now . . . I just gotta see what happens next. On to the second part! Thanks for a cool story!

Now I'm at school and reading this story! Whoah-oh! But ya know what? This story is starting to really upset me! Honest to God! Well, I suppose that's one reaction you might want out of readers, but dang, girl! I was driving to school this morning and I was down-right sad thinking about this thing! Especially now with Ash not being able to communicate with anyone but Pokemon . . . oh! I hope he gets back to normal again! I'm getting to the end of this, and getting really anxious to see what happens! I can probably squeeze in a few more chapters before my next class . . . can't you see how school is always getting in the way of me reading your fics? LOL Don't worry, I'll fight school anyday! Heehee! Catch ya later! _

Well, I have been defeated. Two more chapters down the line, and I NEEDED to write this review! What just happened to Ash? I'm afraid to go on to the next chapter and see! Does look too good right now though . . . oh! Dang it! I want to read more! Okay, okay, I'll read ONE more part, then go home and actually get some sleep since I'm going to be at school tomorrow for 9 hours . . . Arrrrgh! Once again, great fic! Poor Ash!