 deviousdoornobs 3/2/10 . chapter 13I like your story, and plotline a lot, but there is one thing that confuses me. In chapter seven Harry and Draco call Lupin a "filthy werewolf" and a "thing", yet in chapter twelve you say that Lupin is Draco's godfather and helped instruct him in the dark arts. Could you please explain what's going on? |
 kari2500 3/11/06 . chapter 13this is much better written. i see you have improved your writing skills. i also see that you seem to have a knack for writing intriguing yet unfinished stories. a shame really. i mean, how can you write such interesting original stories and not finish them? *pouts*
well anyway, this is another wonderfull story. not as many twists as the other, but it definatly has some interesting unforeseened twists of its own.
i was intriguied with the idea of the snake, the dragon, and the darkness. names of which suits them quite well, i believe. i also like that they're all together. it is quite... sexy that is. indeed.
i loved the beginning. oh it was hilarious really. i loved the way his mind works now. so deliciously evil and sinister. so slytherin, which is a given considering he is the heir.
i never felt such satisfaction untill i read this fic. it really was wonderfull the way he treated everyone like crap. specifically the mud-blood and the weasel. they most certainly deserved it. *grins evilly* strange... i never slide into this specific mood unless someone mentions blood. i always thought this mood was in association to my obsession with blood. turns out this mood is just my madness. *laughs hesterically* how ironic. it seems i will just have to use that knowledge to my advantage, and make some alterations on my mask. it would do me no good if those fools suspect me. *sighs* it would be nice if i could just cut them up and torture them a bit. but it would do. i doubt it will fit the persona my mask displays. how... unfortunate, they get to live... just for a little while longer that is.
i dearly like this fic, and all the sin and insanity that ensues. again, a shame you havent finished this fic. a damn shame indeed, i am quite fond of it now. and for some reason all i can think about is scarlet warm delicious blood at the moment. *licks lips* silly me, i getting myself all thirsty.
well, anyway, as you already know, i love this fic as well. again, i wish desperatly for you to continue it, but theres no need for hope. i mean, if one hopes, those hopes will be cruelly crushed coldly. its best to have low expectations so one does not get dissapointed when they realize the truth. i dont really expect you to continue any of your fics really, but it would be nice if you did. it will give me quite a shock, i believe.
Well, Ja ne
Kari |