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Reviews For: Winter
Shiroki Kietsuki 2003-05-28 . chapter 1
Ticklish tickle tickle.
*grins foolishly*
never mind that it's the middle of summer or so, this fic is aww, sweet ^__^ ken seems so juvenile and yet wise, spontaneous, warm and sweet... aya, cold, walled-up, etcetc, but his loosening (and warming, humanizing? *laughs*) up is just well done. and the kiss? sweet. damned cute. ^__^ thanks, it was a nice read =)
Sadistic Lane 2003-05-13 . chapter 1
Damn you, I was giggling throughout that entire story...I never giggle. So yeah, damn you. Oh, and I love your fiction. ;)
alone, alive 2002-11-24 . chapter 1
I love it. It's fluffy. ^^; Everything I can't write. Do more! And keep up the good work *-*
olivia-yuymaxwell 2002-11-22 . chapter 1
this's very beautiful sappy fics, i love it!!
write more ne!? :) RANKEN RULES!
fei3 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
Awww. This is so beautiful. I really loved the way you contrasted winter and summer, And the one liners for White, and also Black. Lovely. Not to mention the 'defrosting' process. Man I sound silly when I put it that way ne? LOL The ending was perfect. You should write more. My itch uis not scratched yet. Ticklish tickle tickle. LOL Great!
Kyri 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
AWwwwwww......that was so cute!
Keeshe Kal'daka 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
@_@ Yesh, do more sappy RanKen fics! I loved this! ^_____^ So cute!!!

-Keeshe
P.S. Speare 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
Sap and silliness is good, and is just what's needed sometimes, I say! :)

This was a very enjoyable piece - not too heavy, and not too dark. Your use of imagery and symbolism brings out the characters beautifully, and sets a fairly mellow tone throughout. There's a certain underlying darkness in Ran/Aya's voice, and still, that's balanced nicely in the description and presence of Ken. A fairly character-centred piece, and a relaxing, readable one at that. Great job! ^_^
TearsOfFire 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
You are a very good writer, and I enjoyed this fic alot.
marsupial 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
aaaah that was so cute! I am such a sucker for sap *laugh* and you should definitely wrote such silly fanfics again because it wasn;t silly! now my tummy is all warm and happy... *grin* You have a very poetic style of writing, I like it a lot! Excellent job!
siberian 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
oh my god.. it's sooooo sappy^^! and very well done at that! love your style of writing^^! nice job, really ^___^!
Lilas 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
I think you're the ruler of silly fics!! So rule over them! Oppress them and enslave them! In other words: WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! *nods nods* Yep. That's all I have to say. Oh, that and I LOVED IT!!!! ^__^ Ja!
Yosomi 2002-11-17 . chapter 1
That was great!! Just the thing I need in the morning when I wake up. Along with a big mug of coffee, of course. But really, that was really, really sweet. XD
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