Coooool story! )

It was good. Very good with adjectives, but with the way some writers do things today you could very easily turn that into a novel despite the fact it was probably too similar to Brandon Lee's Crow. Very good when you bring a symbol like the crow into a story to help bring about emotion. It's also very interesting how you have written such different stories to this one, your a very multi subject author and would like to post you on a website that posts good fanfics such as these...email me if interested.

i like it!

Sad. To the person who wrote this. I must say that you have me crying at this very moment as I write this response. I cryed for all 3 movies but Brandon Lee's Crow made me cry the hardest. And this just reminds me of it so much. With things in it that was in his movie. And I can't help but truly believe and understand what he had said in it. "Victims aren't we all?" And that is so true and real to me.

That was brilliant!

You certainly kept me spellbound.

You brought out the deep emotion that Eric felt for Shelley. You have the touch.

Never never take that for granted, but learn from the deep connection that you

have with your soul...

"...love gives naught but itself, and takes naught but from itself. For love

is sufficient onto love. Even as love crowns you, so shall he crucify you..."

- Kahlil Gibran

Take care, always

L

Neatly written. Your writing has energy that many stories lack.

That was pretty good.

i'm liking what I see once again. It's very similar to the last but that's what I like about it. 11 out of 10 for imagination with the doughnuts scene. Write your other work very soon, and I hope to hear from you soon. Love Gemma Potter