Pandora of Ithilien 2008-06-25 . chapter 6ben has a point. they'd best come up with something good. |
Writingtriq 2006-04-01 . chapter 6please go on i like it very very very much i want more jej |
Polished Gem 2006-02-18 . chapter 1Hmm. I'm surprised the children are still there. For some reason, with fics like these, I always expect the children to turn up missing when they're left--especially since this has happened in Charmed a few times if I remember correctly. I haven't watched the show in years. Anyway, I hope Leo will be alright, although I'm pretty sure he will be...since I'm optomistic--gah! I know I spelled that word wrong! Sorry--about happy endings. I'll read more when I get the chance. And sorry it took me so long to write a return review! Phew! Crazy life.
Becca |
Dragon Rider22 2005-01-01 . chapter 6yes, finaly! I love you now, just update sooner than you did, because that was rediculous. |
Barb6 2004-12-28 . chapter 6I am so glad you have updated your story - it is very good. I hope you continue writing. I want to see how this story plays out. I want Ben and Melinda to save their families. |
Christine Marquez 2004-12-28 . chapter 6oh, good story. But the chapters are too short. Gr. Please update soon,i'm begging |
Magical Princess 2004-12-28 . chapter 6awesome! Yay! i hope you continue to update!
AMANda |
KenadiFaith04 2004-10-02 . chapter 5Please update update! i love this story your have to keep writing. Please! |
SJ-23 2004-09-30 . chapter 5hey...i think it was a great story...i can't remeber if ive reviewed this story before or not...i can't remeber...anyway...i liked it |
Dragon Rider22 2004-07-18 . chapter 5more, more! Im greedy, I want more! |
Dragon Rider22 2004-07-18 . chapter 4oh, this is so cool!! so far so good, keep up the good work |
Dragon Rider22 2004-07-18 . chapter 3hey, if he was two months, I think thats what you said, how could he have been alive when she was three, I think thats what you said too. |
Dragon Rider22 2004-07-18 . chapter 2and they dont know that they are cousins, she doesent remember her cousin, does she? I wish she did. |
Dragon Rider22 2004-07-18 . chapter 1you killed them! why? why did you kill them? you are so mean!! and HOW are they supposed to bash evil when they are dead? HM? |
mcgirl 2004-03-30 . chapter 5This is really good. What happens next, do they kill Ben and let melinda live. I have to know what happens next |