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| cukoo 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww! now i wanna give percy a really big hug!! i think it was a good length. any longer could have spoiled it. i hope u write more percy. |
| mischiefmagnet 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseVery descriptive. Makes me want to give Percy a big hug! |
| penguin-sensei 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abusenice job! I thought I was actually looking at him !!! I knew he wasn't that bad ...but why is he so sad? Continue writing on Percy, he deserves it !!!! |
| Zoe McAuthor 2002-12-13 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Someone showing love for darling Percy! Can't wait to read more of your work! |
| the2ndredhairedpotter 2002-12-07 ch 1, | abuseohhh so good! It's wonderful when people can attempt to try to understand Percy's character. even if he is a smaller character. who knows what made him the way he is and hwo knows if he will ever let it drop or what will happen but this is a lovely little short for sure!! |
| reveur idioteque 2002-12-03 ch 1, | abuseShort, but sweet. That is to say, you've done a nice job of delving into Percy's character in this. The narrator sees beyond Percy's exterior with frankness and concern to find what's really there. A real eye opener that counters the unfair stereotypes about Percy. |
| Alexis3 2002-11-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, you have to write more. What made him that way? |
| Skye Rocket 2002-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful! I just wish it was longer. |
| G. R. Jensen 2002-11-17 ch 1, | abuseawww... this is sweet! please write more! It's going on my favorites! |