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cukoo
2008-02-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww! now i wanna give percy a really big hug!! i think it was a good length. any longer could have spoiled it. i hope u write more percy.
mischiefmagnet
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abuseVery descriptive. Makes me want to give Percy a big hug!
penguin-sensei
2002-12-29
ch 1,
abusenice job!
I thought I was actually looking at him !!!
I knew he wasn't that bad ...but why is he so sad?
Continue writing on Percy, he deserves it !!!!
Zoe McAuthor
2002-12-13
ch 1,
abuseExcellent!

Someone showing love for darling Percy! Can't wait to read more of your work!
the2ndredhairedpotter
2002-12-07
ch 1,
abuseohhh so good! It's wonderful when people can attempt to try to understand Percy's character. even if he is a smaller character. who knows what made him the way he is and hwo knows if he will ever let it drop or what will happen but this is a lovely little short for sure!!
reveur idioteque
2002-12-03
ch 1,
abuseShort, but sweet.
That is to say, you've done a nice job of delving into Percy's character in this. The narrator sees beyond Percy's exterior with frankness and concern to find what's really there. A real eye opener that counters the unfair stereotypes about Percy.
Alexis3
2002-11-17
ch 1,
abuseOh, you have to write more. What made him that way?
Skye Rocket
2002-11-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is wonderful! I just wish it was longer.
G. R. Jensen
2002-11-17
ch 1,
abuseawww... this is sweet! please write more! It's going on my favorites!
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