This is a very good, scratch that THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES

I'VE EVER READ AND I'VE READ D*MN NEAR 500 STORIES! I can still

see why you are one of XT's favorite authors. The only thing I'd

work on is spelling and spacing. Other than that great job!

A loyal reader and reviewer,

~GreatAether96

Even for your first romance I can see why you are one of XT's

favorite authors and now you're one of mine.

A loyal reader and reviewer,

~GreatAether96

OK, from this story, I can tell you have immense talent. This was your first book on , and you already have the makings of a great author. At times, the grammar and spelling was lacking, but over all, it was great, and from reading one of your more recent fanfics, I can tell you've improved immensely. Some of the plot was a little weak, but overall, interesting and the diction was amazing as well.

Ah, the hilarity of randomness... Some of those poems were getting rather rediculous though. XD

Great story Karen, I hope you continue with the great writing skills you have.

I really, really liked this story, there was romance, there was action, there was adventure, I can safely say that the two day read (I'm a SLOW reader) was well worth it.

*grins*

Keep on writing good stuff like this, and you've got yourself a VERY happy robot fan.

~XT

yay me, I finally finished after...a couple of months..:D...YOU DID SO FRICKIN AWESOME IN THIS STORY! YOU RULE! YAY EVERYTHING! O,o. kay then, let's move on. very good. I enjoyed, probably everyone else did, cuz if i did...you get the point. anyways, i'm gonna go read some depressing harvest moon fanfics, for they will always be and always have been my favourite type, kay bye now, later, i'll shut up soon, can someone teach me to shut up please, it's really late and I wanna go read more story's before i get kicked off the computer! Bye now, i'll shut up now!

Neato! I liked it! I bet Link is like, in love with Saria or something! I really can't wait to read the other...what, 26 chapters? Long enough for ya? Good work! Keep it up, keep it up! :D buh bye!

LOL! Nice... I LIKE IT... Can't... comment... laughing... too... hard... LOL

just to let u know they did have cameras in MM so they probably had them then

Oh my god this story made me laugh really hard and also made me cry and I enjoyed the fight scenes.

aww! the story is over! not fair. i was just really getting into it! what is the sequal called anyways?

angry Kokiris eh? well i dont review just cause ppl tell me to. i review when i feel like it. good chapter but link and the kokiri were a bit ooc but it was good none the less.

aww! you call that a showdown?? lol it was a good chapter anyways. keep writing!

o creepy!! yay another showdown between the King of Evil and the Hero of Time! go Link! W00T

lol this should get interesting. Lol Mido and Ruto? hmm lol somehow i think they are perefect for each other.