Starrychick90 2003-05-23 . chapter 1Even though it is really short, it was wonderful! You do a really good job with writing Jamie and Landon, but ecspecially Jamie! This was a very sweet story. |
googly eyes 2002-11-27 . chapter 1short; but sweet. i like to prefer to think that them dacning in the moonlight was just a spur of the moment thing, but u tied it in with the story nicely. |
FreeSpiritedChic 2002-11-20 . chapter 1very sweet and luvley! |
Lauren 2002-11-18 . chapter 1 That was a really cute chapter!!!!!!!!! |
Emily 2002-11-18 . chapter 1 Awwwwwww!!!!! That was SOO good! Your an awesome writer, Mary Beth! Write mooore!:o) |
BlueEyedPrincess01 2002-11-17 . chapter 1OMG that was so sweet! I loved it! I especially liked the ending:
As I watched Landon make his way to his car, I knew I would never forget this night. The night we danced in the moonlight.
That made me cry! Very emotional ending. I hope you continue to write more fics about AWTR!
-BlueEyedPrincess01 |