its saying that the page no longer works- was really enjoying the fic

Thank you so much! At last I have read a Will/Sydney fic! I am undecided on who I want to end up with who, but I think that Will is gorgeous. His eyes just do it for me. Thank you for not going the predictable way and ending her up with Vaughn..I get tired of those stories..
-x-

thats so sad even though i wanted syd to be with vaughn
i like will and that broke me to peices
i was thinking someone should make a connection with syd and sark
eh?

uve got to be kidding me!
syd? kissing will?
thats crazy!
but im glad someone finally had the nerve to put in writting
i syd gets togeether with vaughn though

vaughn would NOT be such a jerk on the real show. he would never ever pressure syd to do something she didnt want and he wouldnt get in the way of her and will if they were to ever get together.

I'm sorry but you really seemed to have reversed the personalities of Vaughn and Will, if it was intentional then job well done, if not I must say I don't like the jerk you've made Vaughn OR Will out to be!

I'm sorry, but our characters seem so OUT of character in this fanfiction, but I guess thats why its called fiction, huh!?!

although i don't want will and syd to be together, i can't help but love this story! :D write more!

great story! keep it up!

hmmm, syd and will? NO!!! i hope it will turn in to syd/vaughn... otherwise keeping writing, its a good story (except for that little detail about syd/will LOL jk) i wonder why will is calling vaughn?

well written! although i do not like will, i think that its good to know that your story will eventually turn into S/V :) update soon, this is a good start!

I like this! I like any fight between Syd and Will! Way to go! Can't wait to see the next chapter?!?!