So you probably aren't interested in this fanfic any more, if you even read this! But please continue, I've just come across it and the story is very intriguing. I'd love to read more!

arg! cliffhanger! i need more story, oh mighty author! we are at your mercy! ;)

it would be nice if you updated once in a while, the cliffhanger is killing me...

Good story. I hope you return and update it.

So what did she see? Ah! :)

what did she see?

please update soon! your story is really good.

I hope you update soon

Hm...i'm intrigued and curious as to what it is that Ronnie wasn't prepared for when she saw it. It is a well written fic. Try to update ASAP. _

Loving it, loving it! Great story, though I will admit that I'm not exactly a big H/R-shipper... (not that I am a H/L-shipper either...) But still, a great story! Update soon please!

Love the last line, very dramatic. Thanks for reviewing my story and the suggestion that I look at yours, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

are you going to continue it? because it's really good!

this was really good! keep it going, hun. it was sad and "dramatic-al". I loved it. keep going.

Wow that was awesome, keep on going, don't you dare make it a stand alone )

I think I'm going to cry now..This is sad..It was good now..

-Suzums