Alright, I'm gonna start crying. I thought I had this author stuff mastered, but *no*, I had to read this and realize that I have to improve my ability *yet again*! This is great, it's like poetry and prose combine seamlessly into one masterpiece.

this is sad. very good, but sad. i'm very slow so i can't figure out who it's about, tell me, onigai. i liked it and i hope that if you write any other poems that they're just as good, or better then this. bai-bai, gonna look at some other stuff.

Leggins and Kniffers! Arguably my favorite Trigun coupling...so much violence and mental abuse. Yum. ^^;;

A lovely piece of story. I'm tempted to say poetry; it seems a bit of both to me. Legato's always been one to think in romantic language, so either would be accurate. I love the ending line: "... I scream inside because I know...just one more touch from You and I would have been free." That one really stood out to me, for some reason. There's lots of emotion in it. Excellent job all around! Oh, and thank you for your review of my Trigun short. At least SOMEONE agreed with me. ^_^ *bows*

Dear God, this was amazing. Terrifically poetic and flowing, painful, terribly painful. You wrote this well. The true meaning of exquisite pain.

Oh, this is wonderfully written. Knives/Legato is the only yaoi pairing I like because it's so in character, so plausible-and you did it very, very well for so few words.

This is great. I wish I could put yaoi in my favorites, no?

That was really pretty. It seemed so alive. Wow.

Whoa.... This is a beautiful ficlet. Short but sweet... The obsession the character has with that one touch is visible and wonderful and painful to see. I love it. **applauds**

My God, I love your writing.

T_T I weep for my poor Legato... why is it that everyone else can write so beautifully with him, and I cannot?! Nicely done, sir, wonderful style of writing! The powerful capital letter Y in You just says it all... I loved it! Keep up your awesome works. ^_^

I don't like sticking my nose into my own stories, but...

...yes, it is. My favorite pair, ne?

...Wow. So much said with so little, and so beautifully done. *pets you* Thank you for writing the first good Trigun fic I've had the pleasure to read in a while. ^_^

Curious, is this KnivesxLegato? It certainly seems it. I like it. The description of what the speaker (whom I'm assuming is Legato) is evocative and beautiful; the reader gets a really sense of a very twisted and perverse ache. If I have the characters right. Do tell me if I am or not!