Cheerleader16 2008-10-19 . chapter 2Loving it! |
nurray 2008-08-13 . chapter 6This chapter still has some references to Nabiki and Kasumi knowing that Ranma and Akane are from 2 years into the future. This is at odds with the earlier chapters. |
KohanaSaotome 2008-01-30 . chapter 1i have always want them together from they were kids |
masaki yang yi1 2008-01-04 . chapter 19Oh my,that was diffrent to be certen. How will Akane cope with a Shampoo who want's to marry Ranma-chan and who already know's about his curse? Defenly one of the better Ranma+Akane story's
out on the web. |
GJWKtfg 2007-11-21 . chapter 6I'm am enjoying this story and hate to nitpick but... I think you left references to the previous storyline the the following two passages of chapter 6 "Two Cool for School" Both reflect the older Tendo sisters as aware that Ranma and Akane have come from the future.
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Nabiki even for all her intelligence can still be forgiven for forgetting the somewhat unusual fact that while chronologically, the Saotomes had only been here for two days; Ranma and Akane possessed two additional years worth of knowledge.
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"Do you think she'd really hurt you over Ranma, they only known each other for two days, or maybe two years if what they claim is true. She's known us for sixteen or eighteen years."
Nabiki looked at her older sister skeptically.
"We don't know what happened in those two years. From what they told us the other night, it seems like I might have caused some trouble for them over those two years. I'm not sure, but I think that just maybe she would be willing to kill for him and he might be willing to kill for her."
Thank you for taking the time to write this I think I will enjoy it a great deal. |
Stygian Styx 2007-11-19 . chapter 20good story, please update soon... Though at all would be appreciated. |
BlackRoseFire 2007-10-30 . chapter 20Awesome. I really like how you put the different gods into this story. Please continue to write this awesome story. |
deitarion/SSokolow 2007-09-29 . chapter 20Good until the end of chapter 19. Chapter 20 overloads it with dark gods and newly-entered characters. Congratulations, you have the rare (dis)honor of dropping a story from a rating of 4/5 to 3/5 in a single chapter.
Good work on the others though. |
AMWOOD co 2007-09-08 . chapter 20I read this some time ago, and I assume it shall never see a text editor again, but I felt that I should say something, namely that your choices for Chaos seem good, but might I suggest one more if you ever continue this: Tatewaki becomes Tzeentch's second attempt. Why? Tzeentch is the manipulator, the master of mind and fate, and a pathological lier. Tricking Kuno is like getting at least one grain of sand in your hand at the beach (you not only can do it but you get more than you bargained for). How easy would it be to fool someone like Kuno when a college patriarch was turned (of course it would have to involve something about gaining the power to break spells such as that held on the Pig-Tailed girl).
As for the story itself, well I don't remember much, but I do recall it being very enjoyable, but those shadowy figures at the end always seemed to take something away.
From the offices of AMWOOD co |
Eloise 2007-08-28 . chapter 20 I loved this fic, and i cant wait for the next chapter! keep going, you're great! |
Zarz 2007-05-19 . chapter 20This is a really great story! I've seen a few good ones where Ranma goes back in time, but it was definitely neat seeing both Ranma and Akane go back. I also loved seeing Loki - you write him as a really cool character, he just needs to pay a bit more attention to his mouth! I know you haven't updated this story for ages, but I'd really love it if you continued further! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
deathrunner 2007-01-15 . chapter 1A very interesting story a little fast with Nodoka but otherwise ok.
Looking forward to more.
Bye. |
TegwenielWestwind 2006-11-10 . chapter 1What a fun read! Hoping for more! |
Waveless0Emotions 2006-09-18 . chapter 20a very good story! |
Lunar Kitty Kat 2006-07-03 . chapter 17Interesting...Radical in some parts, ridiculous in others. |