May Eve 2008-05-30 . chapter 1-cries silently- We are all responsible. Whether we realize it...or accept it. |
westkitsune 2008-05-02 . chapter 1That was so emotion-filled, so *real*..I..I'm speechless for words... very beautiful, and insightful *teary* |
ScreamForSOH 2007-12-17 . chapter 1interesting concept.
I really like this. |
Yuuram88 2007-11-17 . chapter 1Yes I know it's a bit late to review this but seriously the Harry Potter fanfic is bloody huge. I just have to review this becuse you honestly brought out the strong sense of wrong the light side has done and that nobody is perfect let alone good. My eyes were tearing up by the end of this especially the part with Draco and Harry you really captured the bitterness of it. I really quite enjoyed this. |
martan 2007-09-28 . chapter 1 that´s so sad ... |
TheFallenbecomesHaunted 2007-09-13 . chapter 1holy crap that sad yet truei think |
Silver Sailor Ganymede 2007-07-26 . chapter 1That was so beautiful and heart-wrenching... you've left me speechless, I honestly don't know what else to say... |
miss brownie 2007-05-15 . chapter 1 wow! This was written very well. It was a very interesting view of how the war would turn out. Thanks for sharing. Loved your story! |
lietothedevil 2007-04-24 . chapter 1my god. that hit right to the gut. lovely writing. really good. i love the way that you took the slytherin stereotyping and made it into something heartwrenching. |
Queen Vampiress 2007-03-03 . chapter 1omfg! I'm tearing up, and my throat feels weird.This was really intense. It was like- wow. I never thought of that. But I guess it makes a lot of sense. The whole stereotyping thing. The last few lines were pure brilliance. This is definitely going to leave me thinking for a while... |
Hasamaki 2007-02-07 . chapter 1Brings a perspective that most of us(writers)don't even bother to think about, let alone write.
Your style of writing makes the reader feel more invloved as well. A nicely done piece of writing.
Hasamaki (formly known as Kazama Hasaki) |
kasmo 2007-02-01 . chapter 1I never really thought of it in those terms before, but it really does make sense. The truth is so hard to take. Most people just can't handle it. Ron is very perceptive in your fic, what is a pleasant change.
How extremely sad it is for the Slytherins, though. If only the injustices of old weren't carried forth to the present to condemn the innocent over and over again.
Draco's death was sad, but it was needed. The Slytherins probably know that Voldemort's side isn't the way to go, but I guess there isn't really any alternative at the moment, with everyone being so blind. |
you're my Star 2006-12-04 . chapter 1This is lovely and engaging. It was so detailed and eloquent that I'm crying now even as I type this. I love your theory on the war. |
wild wolf free17 2006-11-21 . chapter 1Oh, I love this. Well done. |
Unaiza 2006-11-09 . chapter 1That's so sad... I love it!
And I've never thought of it that way, but what Draco said is kind of true. Going onto my favorites list. TT__TT |