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sephirothleo1 2004-12-25 . chapter 2
man it is great! i want more chapters!
Avy-Hellsing 2004-02-24 . chapter 2
Yey! You updated the second chapter!Finally :D Good work! Keep it up ;D
Eowrah 2003-03-04 . chapter 1
Well. I'm not entirely happy with the Alucard/Integral thing. Both seem to act rather OOC once and then and Intergral's thoughts about our all-time-fav-vamp sounded more like the thoughts of one of us crazy fan girls ;)
However, the last scene is interesting and makes me want to read more. And I'm also interested to see where the new relationship of those two will lead to (cause I'm a bit tired of those /they-share-a-night-and-that's-it/-stories).
To keep it short: more plz ;)
Dizzy Girl 2002-12-05 . chapter 1
I'm now registered, so I wanted to put a review that is signed. I absolutely *LOVE* this story!!!! Ingegra is in character in my view. OH GOSH, AND WHEN ALUCARD AND INTEGRA GET AT IT!!! I am really wondering who is at the door, and if they were caught. AAAAAHHHHHH I'm going nuts, I can't wait to read more! *pacing around room*
Mephisto Inabinet 2002-11-21 . chapter 1
: Cries somewhat. : Continue !! I wanna see what happens between Iscariot and Hellsing. God only knows, the battle between the two forces are indeed interesting. Heh, and the relationship between Arucard and Integie ? Yeah, it was interesting. A different view on Integra herself. I wanna read more.
passionsmuse 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
hehe interesting.. anyway fav line: "He was a chaotic being after all." that sends delicious shivers down my spine =)
Miyako 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
Awe..I like were this is going...Anderson and Alucard,never a going sign.Well,anyway...That was great,I hope you continue soon ^^
croaky 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
Mm. Nice read. Not abd at all. OOC or not, i didn't particulary notice nor cared. Sounds like you have a build-up of plot going so -will check back for more, if there is more.
DragonsEclipse 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
Nice fic you got there. The beginning isn't written well. You have sentence fragments and it seemed that you weren't completing your thoughts, but you got better at it as you went along. I must say that Integra and Arucard are out of character. Arucard would never do that with anyone, least of all Integra. But above all, this was interesting. It does show a new light on those two and I suppose that's a good thing. No one wants a fic to be exactly like the anime, ne? I have a little problem here, you left this off just when it was starting to get interesting and now I want to know what happens next. Post the next chapter soon! ^_^ And if you find the time, do you mind checking out some of my work? I hope I didn't offend you, I usually don't give out criticism, but I feel that this story has some potential. Keep writing! ^_^
The DeathBunnie 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
Ahem. Okay, first off, I will NOT make any lewd comments
about Integra being trapped between a rock and a...er...
"hard place." Nope, not gonna happen, no puns...no way,
no how. I'm a *good* bunnie, after all, and not a naughty
thought passes through my mind. Ahem.

Now before the good Lord strikes me down for lying,I want
to let you know this is getting quite fantaistc. I damand
you write more. That's right, DEMAND. And, as queen of
known universe, you know I always get what I want. So nyah.

Actually, I rather like the characterizations. I have yet
to see this series in English, but from the style of Japanese
the two characters use, they are very nicely in character.

Keep up the Stuff,
Da DeathBunnie
Dizzy Girl 2002-11-18 . chapter 1
I loved your story, I can't wait to read more!
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