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| smartbookworm 2008-07-26 ch 11, | abuseGreat story. keep writing. |
| Literati44 2008-07-14 ch 11, | abuseWHY! haven't you update in a long time?! i cant believe traci actually would go that low as to shoot jess, well actually i can believe it:) anywho please pretty please with literati on top, please UPDATE a.s.a.p.:):) alsoi loved the part at the end, so... hilarious:):) good times... good times:):) anywho please UPDATE:):) |
| LilyBellaCullen 2007-08-26 ch 11, | abuseThis has been happening to me all week. I find an amazing story, and also find it hasn't been updated in FOUR YEARS! This story is really good, I just wish you'd finished it, I mean, it hasn't been updated since 2003. Anyway...rant over lol. This story is really good and I would put it on my favourite stories, but its starting to get too many on there so I'm only putting completed ones on there. Sorry if I sound rude by the way. |
| Maiqu 2007-03-10 ch 11, | abuseI think the dad didn't get married or something like that so that's why she shot Rory... i love this story |
| LazyBoyGilmore 2007-03-03 ch 11, | abuseyou'll try to update soon?! it's been four freakin' years!dont leave me hanging here! update! |
| Milo Maniac 2006-08-23 ch 11, | abuseWow. This story is amazing. The ending of the chapter threw me though. You must revive this and update, it's just way to amazing to leave on hold forever. So, please, please, please update ASAP. :D |
| wallaceout 2006-07-31 ch 11, anon. | abusethat last bit about putting her hand on the bulge in his pants and pulling it out threw me and then i read the part where rory says you read first and i was just thinking what the hell! how could he read that and then i continued on and strated cracking up laughing. post soon cuz your script is good and a little unusual but well written |
| WhoIamIsMe3492 2006-07-16 ch 11, | abuseUPDATE! |
| BookWorm08 2006-07-03 ch 10, | abuseyou killed her! |
| BookWorm08 2006-07-03 ch 9, | abuseI like it.But in a nother story i read his last middle naem was Alexandre.which one is it? |
| BookWorm08 2006-07-03 ch 7, | abuseshe has a fiancia? I.D.U.S.! |
| BookWorm08 2006-07-03 ch 2, | abuseits alittle...diffrent.But im gettin in to it, bookworm08 |
| Adonica 2006-01-23 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis story is AWESOME!! You should either write another chapter, or write a sequel! UPDATE SOON! |
| purpleribbions 2005-12-06 ch 11, | abusemore i need more |
| andreaNmilo4evr 2005-11-19 ch 11, | abuseomg i loved it so much please keep writing i cant wait til update! |