Wow that was… kind of weird, but kool I guess. Not one of my favorites I guess.

~Ally~

this is good. write moer soon.

This is a sweet story. I wish I were more like Lily ;-)

This seems to have a different style from all the other L/J fics I've read. It's written very simply and yet it had a charismatic mixture of poetry and fiction. Great job. ^_^

This is really sweet! It is really great!

that was a beautiful story.
Not odd at all :)
If only we knew the true story of Lily and James.

THis is well
Short and Sweet!
Cute...Adorable!
I Love It
Has a sad ending
but hey I've only read one l+j that didn't...(well ones that go when they get married have harru and stuff)
actually most of them that I am aren't finished

Sweet ^^

I didn't think it was odd at all! I love it! It is really good so PLEASE write more!

AAwww!! That's SO good!! Is there going to be more after that? Or is that the end? It's amazing!!!

Christa

Weird....but good =D

That is so sweet. I totally loved it. ;) You're going to be a fantastic author one of these days!


~Katie~

Really sweet - different - but extremely well-written (as always ;)) I like all the quotes even the WDisney one, so don't insult it!!! Lol, write some more soon!

- KoolKitty/AnotherKoolKitty/Aria

good story but a little short! keep up the great work! ^0^

Ok, I'm not sure whether to compliment your talent, or scold you for not dedicating yourself solely to your other stories!