I think you should do another story about Knuckles and DJ. That part was kind of a clif hanger

You are STILL my hero! That story was so completely awesome- your writing is amazing!

Somehow I managed to miss four new chapters...but anyway. At least I've read them now! And it was awesome.
And sad. So sad when all those kids died. I was so scared that Griffin was going to be killed off as well! But he didn't, and he's the anchor and has a cute little sister.
It was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I think that you are a great writer, and I hope that you keep it up.

This was so sweet. I loved it.

A little sidenote though in chapter five you killed Pockets. 'It took the better part of fifteen minutes to determine who the faceless fallen was- Pockets, a boy of about eleven.'
Then in chapter six he was talking to Graham and Levi. Just thought I'd point that out.

But other than that the story was great it had me crying in a few parts, but it is very well done. There are very few great stories out there and there are almost no good Peter Pan ones and this one is great. This has to be the longest review I have ever done.

Ah! They have to be able to get home!!

What will happen next (I know that sounds corny)?! I wanna know, I wanna know, I wanna know...

Ahahahahahahaha *chokes on spit and splutters* ahem. I am LIKING your story so far, but what's the Fade?

hey, itz really good... No! Don't kill Gryffin!

A little mistake I noticed. Earlier in the chapter when Scrabble and Knuckles meet she asks what twenty are with the others, he says:
"Peter, Levi, Griffin, Amanda, Dean, Jasmine, me, Curtis, Nibs, Slightly, Ike, Laura, Mouse, Fox, Pockets, and a few others I don’t know."

But later at the end: It was a smile she hadn’t seen him wear since the night Jasmine died.

is that a mistake, a different Jasmine, or did I miss something?

great chapter! i luved the 1st Levi story and i luv this one as well! i really hope you update this soon cause its excellent ;)

Wow...
Dark followup.
Are you going to continue soon?
I think it's a great story!!

two words:

keep writing

Yeah! New chapter. But it was so sad! I feel so sorry for poor Levi. And Peter. I'm glad that Knuckles finally found the group. Can't wait to find out how they're going to save their home! (They are, aren't they? This isn't going to be a horribly sad story where everyone dies unhappy, right?) Keep writing!

OMg this is wonderful too. Very very sad so far, but I cna't wait for the next part! I love that they had a little boy. I can just see how cute he is now ^_^ hehe Anyways, keep it going and i'll keep this on my list to read!
Anya

Woohoo! I decided to read Music of the Heart again, because I fell madly in love with it... And imagine my surprise when I find out there's a sequel! Another reviewed mentioned that plague stories creep them out... Holy hell, I feel your pain! Plague stories are so scary. u-u I think I might know what's going to happen (well, one thing, anyway.) Post more soon! ^_^

I'm in love!!! I read Music of the Heart in a day and then had to read the sequel. More!!! Please?!?!?! I'm dying here! This is so good, I have to know what happens. I'll be waiting. ;)