Mmmmmm..... Could you bash Taichi and Daisuke up even more??? Or maybe add a few more characters???

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! OhmyGOD!!! I nearly split my sides bustin' with laughter!!!

You have achieved PERFECTION with the characterization! hahaha! The car ride was VERY accurate and the conversations were right on! haha!! AND, you did a marvellous job with the digi-gang! Even with our (or, rather MY) scary antics, no one was OOC! :D :D

There were soo many unexpected moments too!:

"The prize coordinator, Godfrey Smith, was puzzled as he stared at his receiver. He was calling to personally congratulate Ominous and Cracker for winning the trip to Japan. He slowly hung up the phone.

'What the hell was that?'"

TOTALLY did not expect that! hahahaha!!

Oh, and just 'cause I loved this chapter don't think I missed that comment in the end about my "tendencies" X[ That's RIGHT! You better sleep with BOTH eyes open 'cause...meh...nevermind, too lazy...yea, whatever, so I'm just too lazy to do anything...what's it to you?! O.o haha!. Yea, I know...I'm one scary lady! haha (now EVERYONE really thinks I'm a Crazy ** O.o meh...nothing new to anyone who's read my online journal don't already know...heh heh)

Oh, side note: you better believe that Smallville comes first and foremost! heh heh...I joke! (sort of...O.o crap, I've just made a clearance for a one-way to hell, didn't I? O.o)

Well, anyhoo, hurry hurry for the next chappy! :D

~Cracker

Interesting... I like it!!! Are you EVER gonna reveal your names? I think you will but... Is there going to be any connection with the Digimon, not just the characters? Happy Holidays!

Write the rest soon! That's all I really have to say!

~A Crazed Digi-Freak~
*^_^*

Simply amusing, this is how I put it. :) Charming story . . very funny with the name things. ^.^ LOL. But . . do understand, Japan has its own culture and traditions: (this means) No kissing in public! Bowing in respect! Not offending . . soembody! . . (Don't I sound regretfully amusing . . -.-) The one who bows the lowest supposedly has more respect . . (I think?) And mind that I was told by my teacher that Japanese are easily offended . . Watch out! :P

K. Kasai (and I'm not crazy enough to put my real name down. :P)

Hey man! quit raggin' on my ADD! haha! I can't believe you put that in!! haha!

Anyhoo, what's left to say that I already haven't? heh heh...the ball finally gets rolling, eh? Can't wait for the next chapter! *cough* car ride *cough, cough* heh heh.

~Cracker

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!

OMG, WHAT an idea! You're so creative!

I know that I really shouldn't be reading this right now becuase I'm in the process of having a physical and mental breakdown, but I couldn't resist not reading it after you told me the next chapter was out O.o I know, I'm a sucker! ARGH!

Anyhoo, the wrong door thing, I don't know if I should be telling you this because I'm sure to be taunted, but I've done that *several* times (d'oh!) And, the in car trip...pretty accurate...only I probably would swear cut off people (haha!). You've made me sound so...soft! *GASP*! haha!

Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter! (I know! I should talk...heh heh...no comment on my own progress...O.o)

::Sigh:: Back to crappy/boring Lear questions...

~Cracker

This is so cool! So, your a Torontorian too! Well i'm not exactly i'm an Ajaxin...go ajax! Any whoo this is really great so far, that's really nice that your writing this for a friend! well anyways keep up the good work and i can't see what happens next!

*raises eyebrow* Are you two going to paint the town red and green? And can you two . . speak Japanese? - hopefully ya'll understand their English, at the least. ^.~
*sigh* I wish there actually were such a contest. I'll go to Japan someday, but not today. What a pity! And such a beautiful country . . though I'm not sure what I'd do if I'm sat up at a sushi bar. -.- =P

Very humourous so far - gotta run around with the Christmas elves! Or . sing my Christmas carols. Bah. Must do my Of MIce and Men essay. Yuck. Essays. Yuck. ;)

Kara

LOL!

Sounds sort of funny to have you guys in a digimon fic but hey I'll read on.

See You Around!

YES! It has arrived! Well, part of it...but still! I can't wait for the rest. I wonder what hijinx you'll cook up for us (that sounds strange, this is the first story I've been inserted in...O.o heh heh).
Anyhoo, this is a great start. Very interesing how things get rolling...I sure wish that there really was a contest like that...AND, that I was really THAT lucky in real life...*sigh*

Heh heh. Great job! I can't wait for more :D

~Cracker

p.s. you just had to put calculus in there somewhere didn't you O.o *shudder*

Yeeeeeeeah Toronto. ^_^ How come I never heard of this contest? That would have been cool to win... *complains to self* Ah well... Cool start to your story.. Add more soon!!!