didn't get the ending, but the story was still really good. "as softly and somberly as any bride" was using the word bride intentional?

Oh.*shivers* That was amazing. Incredibly dark, very scary, completely chilling.

I love it. :-)

You are *incredible*. Everything you write is genius, I hope you know that. Simply brilliant. I've never been a Ginny-fan, but wowzah, that made me want to change my mind. You really know how to capture dark sexual violence in fantasy worlds...ever thought of LOTR? :)

Wow. Just WOW! When I first saw the title, i....well.....it was very intreguing......very twisting...i liked it. This was a very amazing story. Keep writing!

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Aaaaaand everybody! Another National FF.net Review Week is coming up! Except this time, let's do the ENTIRE MONTH of DECEMBER! The week is next week, the week of the 8th, but if you're like me, do the ENTIRE month! For those of you who don't know, National Review Week (or month) is a week (or month) where people go around FF.net and review like CRAZY! It will help get a lot of us involved with new authors, and it will get a lot of desperate people a chance to have lots of reviews! I want to do the entire month because a lot of people have been hit hard by the absence of lists, MSTs, and actorfics. give like 10 or 15 reviews a day, and everybody will have oodles and oodles of reviewies! Drop me a review if u wanna participate......i'll try to get YOU TWO REVIEWS from me! Toodles and Ta-Ta!

I love you. Really, I do. This is as close to perfection as any mortal can get.

I really like the ending. Fun sailing on this ship, ain't it?

Az :)

Ooo, creepy ending :) wonderfully written of course, you are so great with creative imagery and descriptions.