|Reviews for Aurora|
| Danny 9/11/03 . chapter 1
Really nice. It would be better if Shinji actually kiss Asuka instead of saying anything. Action speaks better then words. In over all, it was great.
Keep on writing
High Hopes Here
| jennyjennai 7/25/03 . chapter 1
Poetic, beautifully written. The imagery of the story was so lovely, almost esoteric in its recital - but beautiful all the same.
| Black Robed One 3/31/03 . chapter 1
It is one of the most wonderful and beautiful stories, I have ever read! Thank you very much for writing it!
| Kay D. Chan 2/16/03 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. It was deep love-not quick fluff, descriptive, poetic, and so like our idealistic sentimental Shinji. I enjoyed how you wrote it. It was just so ROMANTIC and *deep*. I'm tempted to throw a "Yo" or a "Dude" in this to lighten things but I wouldn't change your fanfic for the world. It just seems like you really put a lot of heart and sincerety in writing this. Great job.
| Andross 1/30/03 . chapter 1
Very good! I'm very impressed! It was beautiful! Please keep up the good work! See ya!
| Guest 11/23/02 . chapter 1
Nice fic but what's this all about?
| Amata 11/20/02 . chapter 1
Wow, this is, quite simply, the best story i've read in a long time. it's so hard to find such a simple yet profound love story.
No cliches...congratulations...it's so hard not to sometimes.
It's wonderful, keep writing...
| Jho 11/20/02 . chapter 1
Very nice :)
| SuPeRnOvA145 11/19/02 . chapter 1
VERY GOOD! You can use big words to make good descriptions. Now, you just need to have a good storyline, IC characters, and some action and i'll consider this a real fic. Your description is... abundant, but everything else is lacking. Continue on, and go easy on the descriptions. We look for a story of substance, not a loose description of a colorful visual.
| NoStyle 11/19/02 . chapter 1
what can i say. this was truly amazing i cant believe how well written this was. it had a very poetic like feel to it. i really liked how you compared Asuka and daybreak it was insanely brilliant. again wonderful job.
| Xiin 11/19/02 . chapter 1
Lovely piece, as usual, Kai'nee-san! And, I have a question... When it said, "The skies are red three times a day—- sunset, midnight", is midnight really red? ;
Anyway, ish sweet! [Even though, like Meemee-san, I didn't watch Eva before. Wish I could though..]
| Reizig 11/19/02 . chapter 1
If this takes place anywhere in the regular series, then I can't see Shinji adoring Asuka so openingly, or at all. However, taken out of context, it's great. Beautifully written to the point where I almost don't care whether or not the romanticism makes sense.
Jolly good show.
| Bucky 11/18/02 . chapter 1
hey this is pretty good for a one shot poetic thingy. Short and sweet, nice work
| darksaber 11/18/02 . chapter 1
but whats the story about anyway?
| dennisud 11/18/02 . chapter 1
Cute, though vague as most of this type of one shot seem to be the norm.
But still a slice of a moment of the series and a chance at hope though fleeting.