Oh, this is wonderful. Manna from heaven, wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take this.

I liked this back story into 'Reurise' ;P hope I spelt that right. Awesome characterizations. Great job. I find it interesting, how comfortable you are with the f***, *mind those sensitive ears* It sad that Krit doesn't like dogs. Poor Josh... :D I take comfort in knowing that Zane does ;)

"Krit get out of here, I'm in heat" "It's never "Krit..." like you're her favorite puppy and someone's kicked you." I didn't know whether to let myself laugh or get teary. Two of my favorite X5s.

:( finally gets teary over the ending. Poor Krit. At least I know in my world he has Syl. And in yours, he'd got Alec. *evil grin*

Just a question though...what's up with ff.net. Two seconds ago it went, story not found...now it's back. Weird.

Very cool, I liked. Kirt/Zack though? Interesting.

that was awesome. just spectacular! *bows to the wisdom* i especially like this passage:

"Oh, what a difference seventeen years has made. Now you’re still a
** up kid. But you’re old enough to drink. And drive. And buy a
gun. And have sex, and thereby possibly create more ** up kids
with which to populate the ** up world. Cheers for time and all its
done to improve your life."

Wow. that's awesome!

Interesting. Zack is cute for a guy with a disturbingly prominant chin, nice to see him written about for a change, although the pairing took me by surprise - Krit?

I like the description of the nightmares. Especially this part:

**And the scary part wasn’t losing your toes. It wasn’t the
Nomalie. It was the fact that you hadn’t been on your guard; that the
damned, freaky thing had gotten near you without you knowing it.**

WOW. I wish i could find words to describe what im thinking but i can't. That was such a wonderful piece though. Absolutely amazing. And, kind of sad at the same time.