A wonderful idea! Please continue writing, since it is very interesting and has potential.

This is so cute! I love the three princes going on a journey! And Finwe is so adorable here...I like how his eyes sparkle. And it's good to see he's happy with Indis. I hate reading stories where Indis is just a body for him.

I'm really looking forward to their "journey." I wonder who will make the better camp fire? :)

This is so cute! I love the three princes going on a journey! And Finwe is so adorable here...I like how his eyes sparkle. And it's good to see he's happy with Indis. I hate reading stories where Indis is just a body for him.

I'm really looking forward to their "journey." I wonder who will make the better camp fire? :)

Nice to see Finwe in good spirits. And he doesn't even have to try to turn over the kingship to the princes. Ah, I'm ever fond of the intercourse between Finwe and Olwe. :b I'm quite eager to see exactly how you adapt the tale of the Three Princes of Serip. At least we have the princes traveling together. You do a good job of adopting a fairytale writing style and integrating it with regular storytelling. I look forward to more!

Thanks for the bday present. *bow*

What a great idea. You set the scene very well, in smooth and flowing language. I pity poor Finwe..

A steady beginning, but the end of the chapter leaves me very nervous. Force his sons together... I dunno. Feanor's a hard one to deal with. Oh, and I like knowing that all of them partook in learning the art of jewel craft but Feanor was just plain better. Unfair favortism. But we're not quite into the fairytale yet, are we?

Oh look. I have a scribe. :)

Interesting...making a note to finish reading this. Nothing more stimulating to say....I'm boring

*applause* You go stronger and stronger. And I know now what tale is it. Good idea! It´s great to see someone with imagination..
And I love your Finwë. He´s depicted exactly as I think himk to ber: always optimistic, refusing to let the truth stay as it it, etc. Continue it!

A very good story, Starlight! It was so long since last time you delighted us with a Silm story about Finwë and his people..
Great characterization of the three sons of Finwë, and very good writing. I´ll read next chapter now.