I was a big fan of Freaky Links and this story has a pretty good start so far, hopefully you will continue it because it doesn't make much sense to leave it off where you have. I wanna know what that boy's story is and whats up with those wierd new neighbors. Anyways goodjob and keep writing, I would like to try writing a freaky links story sometime if I can think up a good enough freaky plot. Bye

hey! this is cool!!
We were all shoked about taking freakylinks out... luckily I can still see it on Mexico!

well, I hope you keep on your story.

Interesting start to the story... plan on continuing it???

This is interewsting-I hopw you make more chapters.Though I think it would be better if the story was told from Derek's point of view.