CoolKat Avalon 2007-12-28 . chapter 1Nice one. I especially like the ending were Harrys hand comes through and grabs him. |
Ohyeah100 2007-10-15 . chapter 1I found this very interesting. Really well done. |
LandUnderWave 2007-02-15 . chapter 1*snickers* Have you ever seen when comics characters hold onto the edge of the frame when being dragged along? I'm imagining Draco doing that and his friends all grabbing him and pulling him into the 'heaven' afterlife. Thanks!
Lilz |
histastrea 2006-03-18 . chapter 1This was a really good story, I even went so far as to print out a copy to show my mom, who has read the HP books, but not yet gotten into fanfic. I especially liked the message at the end where "Some people just can't accept the good things in life or in death without a little help from their friends." That statement is a good universal truth that is proven again and again.
My only suggestion would be to vary the phrases that you use in the descriptive part of the sentences. For example, it would read better if instead of always have the quote and then the said by, you mix it up a bit and have the said by and then the quote. Also, be sure that you are differing you "said by's." I.E. "the old man asked" and "St. Peter questioned" with "queered the angel."
Anyway, that's my two bits worth take it with a grain of salt. Overall, though, I greatly enjoyed this story. |
Schnuff 2005-10-06 . chapter 1good |
Astyra 2005-06-20 . chapter 1You are my favorite author of Harry Potter fan fiction. |
Keline Jacquegai Chisp 2005-06-19 . chapter 1 I'm to lazy to log-in. This was great and Draco friends with the trio I just love it. Nice job.
Sincerely,
the Stranger in the moonlight. |
kasp 2004-04-17 . chapter 1 Hey,
This was great! I loved it!!
KASP |
sbxrl4eva 2004-04-15 . chapter 1Oh yay thats was such a good story and so funny i can imagine Dracos face when harry ron and hermoine turned up lamo wo go you! |
Jaded Angel8 2004-02-26 . chapter 1That was so sweet! And sweetly ironic, neh? Loved it.
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JA |
Rogue1615 2003-05-18 . chapter 1 This is a great little fic. It captures their personalties as they might be after all those years. Still like to know how the others died though.
Cho is going to be **... Lol.
Rogue |
Juli3ta 2003-05-01 . chapter 1it's wonderful... Love it |
Muirnin Cocan 2003-04-28 . chapter 1*SUPER GRIN*
Draco in Heaven... well I'll be...
EXCELLENT Story! |
bassguitarnictation 2003-04-19 . chapter 1this story was the most touching story ihav ever read
please dont give up on any of your stories!;) |
Kikyous Spirit 2003-03-16 . chapter 1EE!! That was the nicest, sweetest, cutest, story ever! Wow! I loved it! That was such a grest story! And it ended happy! YAY!! :) I loved the last line Peter says...wow.
I loved it! Great job! :D :D
-KS- |